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Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: March 16, 2005 18:41 CST
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Totally cute! I love the coupling it's one of my favorites! Unknown Hikari/Yami person walking down the street: mcg't listen to her she likes any pair at all, so there is now taste involved in choosing her favorite pairings. Fine but I do like it and the plot is to die for, I've seen alot of angel stuff but this one is very well organized and it already has its similarities to the show/manga. Plus it's not just going in circles to feed lemon/Yaoi lovers, like me! I can't think of who the master is. I keep running through all the characters in my mind, it's not Anzu is it? You said it was a guy and I can't think of any of them. It can't be Shadi but maybe hummm. Wait! I bet it's Noah! I think in the Japanese version it's like 'Noa' wow big change isn't it? Love your story and I can't wait for you to update! Or have you died? I always ask that because that(and new manga)is the only respectable reason for not updating. Thank you so much for writing this fic it's wonderful and I look forward to it's next chapter. Thank You. DK;) P.S. Always poke the meatloaf before you eat it!
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Reviewed By: Youko Kara [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! But you haven't updated in a while... Please Continue! ;)
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Title: Awesome Story!
Reviewed By: PP (PsychoticPharaoh.,,I'm just too lazy to sign in) On: September 01, 2004 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I've never seen anything like it before! I think it's a really cool idea, and I hope you update reeeaaally soon, b/c I'm hooked! ^__^
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Reviewed By: Niffe_24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting, but I wouldn't make kaiba so . . .I don't know, you had his characterisics down pat in the first chapter. (this is not to be cruel, I'm just trying to make a suggestion)+
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Reviewed By: Niffe_24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Niffe_24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 00:51 CDT
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Kewlness!! I love all the multitude of pairings and the such!! I can't wait till the next chapter is finished!!
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