| "Dinner and Dessert" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Ohhhh! I Luv It!
Reviewed By: snowdeep On: May 18, 2009 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this a long time ago but i've only had the guts to review now. I've probably read it over 20 times and i've very happy with it. I only wish that it was longer. The lemon was realistic and i got (Fanning herself) you get the idea. I love the show and this story captured the character's well. Kaname has matured in the story while still being Kaname it was a good mass. I was very happy with you're Souske (Sp) and the reporting was a good touch. So i'd be very happy. (Because i said twenty times one more time won't hurt) if you did a second part or something because i would so read it twenty more times. I'd read your other stuff but i haven't watched those series but when i do i'll read your fanfic first. I really like your writing by the way. Keep up the good work. Your new fan.
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Title: Loved it
Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 18:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
This piece is really well done. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. It's neat and concise without a lot of extra which is a nice break for reading those never ending drabbles people sometimes put up. I love how you portrayed Souske...very well done there as well. I think you've got it right in a way...if they did end up together this is something like how it would sound and that's just perfect. Nicely done :)
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Title: dinner or dessert
Reviewed By: justsuzaku On: February 03, 2005 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think you captured what the experience would have been like...had it happened..you know the characters very well. good job.
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now, here's what us hopeless romantics call a mission! Will the mission continue? I'm gonna stay tuned to find out. ~pagan_sedjou
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Reviewed By: angel yai_21 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed it!And I hope you updated soon... But I was sad that he had to leave for a mission so soon. :(
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Reviewed By: Babay Bunny On: November 19, 2004 13:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL I coudl see the paper fan..can you just imagin his surprised face..lol i love it. I can't wait for an update. But Aww he's going to go... *whimper* I really Hate Tessa (no meaness from tessa lovers)
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