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| "Starcrossed Lovers" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 23:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is so sad, will kurama ever find out what really happened? please write more
| Reviewed By: Saphire Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yes I remember now this is the depressing one *sigh* Umm since I've already said all that I need to say in the first review I gave you (as Iowa chic of corse) I won't say any more.
| Reviewed By: iowa chic On: August 16, 2004 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay normally I like your stories but, uh, that was just really depressing. I think you should add on to that you no not make it be a one shot cause then your story would probably be great I mean the one chapter was good but it was really really really depressing and I for one don't really care for depressing stories. But of corse the poem (loved it by the way) would kind of make it hard but you are a really good author and I love alot of the other stories you have written. So please add on to this cause I really don't care for depressing endings. Your plot was great and even though it had a depressing ending I really like it. ^_^ You don't have to add more it was just a suggestion after all, it is YOUR story.
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