| "Spring Cleaning" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 18:06 CDT
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wow dat was intense lol i loved it great job
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Reviewed By: Scyggy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 03:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've gotta sympathize with Miroku on this one... wow. As hentai fics go, this probably rates in my top ten somewhere, and I read a lot of them. Definitely number one for yuri so far. You did an impressive job of not making it repetitive or too similar to most others of its sort. On a less refined note, the way I imagine Miroku's expression is just plain hilarious. And I saw the opening you left for a sequal or more chapters, and would enjoy seeing the possible angles exploited. All in all, very good work.
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Reviewed By: bbmac On: May 22, 2005 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very good why don't you do one where Inuyasha finds out about Sango Kagome doing this and what happens to them after the seen at the hot spring O.K.
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Reviewed By: HaooyBunnyBabe On: January 26, 2005 19:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Eh. It was pretty good. maybe a 2/10. maybe you should stick to the reg. pairing.
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 13:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!..WOW!..WOW!..WoW! That fic was really good. Kudos! Yeah..I hope you write more like this in the future!
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Title: loved it
Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 15:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to agree there aren't near enough Sangome fics out there. I hope you keep writing and change that. Your fic was really good, you got the story across and didn't even use the normal slang for " sweet piece of heaven" LOL!!!
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Reviewed By: Kellie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Thats all I have to say. Well done on this fic. Very few Sango/Kagome fics out there and this one was well done. Hope you write more like this in the future ^__^
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