| "Chopsticks" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 11:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was really interesting. I curious about the chopstick thing. Can you really do that? I think I'd do that same if I saw someone I was attracted to cook at a resturant. I'd become a regular just for the eye candy. heh heh. I'm not too sure about the soy sauce though, it doesn't seem to be the most reasonable thing to use. I think the honey would have been the better choice but it is your fic.
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 02:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic a lot and what an very I don't know thing to do with the chopstick...hmmm..It was very cute how you got the two together and I wish you would post more fic soon...ja ne
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Reviewed By: Manga-Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 23:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Can you really do that with chopsticks?! Oh...I am so naive...good story, though!
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Reviewed By: Muffie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 06:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I just noticed that I neglected to mention that I really liked the way you got the two together. It was sweet in a very good way and very believable. I like the getting together stuff a lot.
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Reviewed By: Muffie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oooh, ouchie. Sodium on the rectal mucus membrane. Owwie. Salt burns and not in a good way. Tres squick. My butt hurts just thinking about it.
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