| "Do you feel the same?" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sandro666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon, the story so far is great!
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Reviewed By: JasonC On: October 12, 2004 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is fantastic. Very well done. Hope you update
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: October 12, 2004 16:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
good stuff, this chapter almost made me cry, not because it was sad. but because my boyfriend was just using me and doesnt really love me, so it kind of reminded me of that *sighs* good chapter.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 01:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
good ideas so far, intresting how they just happened to find Kagome next to the well. so she wandered back into territory where koga could be...not smart...not smart at all. good job and update when you can. :-)
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Title: ha
Reviewed By: kikyou_104(nis) On: October 11, 2004 22:53 CDT
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ooo myoga is dead i hope they make up...yasha and kago i mean
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Reviewed By: Ms Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 21:14 CDT
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ahh. This is where it starts to get sticky. Thanks for writing and I look frward to reading more of it soon!
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Title: hello
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 20:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey it's a great story so far please update soon please you left it in a really bad place i want to know how yasha is going to react....please update soon thankies matta ne
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 07:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
please continue!!
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Reviewed By: spumante [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 23:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
well besides the length it was very good....i hope inuyasha fixs things before anything bad happens....so update soon please
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Reviewed By: . On: September 19, 2004 23:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Missy Manda On: September 19, 2004 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love ur story...please keep on writing ur my inspiration to write as well...now if i could onloy figure out how to post stories:P YAY for the great story by u!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 21:49 CDT
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omg this great please update soon
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Reviewed By: spumante [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 14:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice story so far cant wait for the update.
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Reviewed By: InuFan545 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhh very nice lemon u have some skills but i beilieve u couldve done better and writtin a bit more as well as add a biit more detail. PLZ Update
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Reviewed By: KatGrrrrl99 On: August 21, 2004 17:35 CDT
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A good first lemon!!!!
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