| "Life After Conclusion" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 06:14 CST
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This is an awesome story, one worth perusing again and again. Now if only there were more chapters to it. Hmmm, well, I suppose you should update. Please do so. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: SilentHypoCrit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 16:46 CDT
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Whilst a lot of story is compressed into this, especially the second chapter, and thus everything seems to be a little rushed, it still is a nice story and I am interested into the "dual Destinys" of the others.
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Reviewed By: Mordre [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 02:52 CDT
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This whole idea seems. Funny. I like it.
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Reviewed By: Wizard Surreal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, forget my previous review... this is really good and is higly rateable! Two thumbs way waaaay up! Beta-Reader _not_ needed!
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Title: Author Extraordinaire!
Reviewed By: Wizard Surreal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 13:59 CST
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Needs a bit of a check up with the font... I definetely do know that you _didn't_ intend for the story to come out in bold - it messes up the reader's concentration. So far it has proven interesting, now all you have to do is present and original and extremely logical and well-presented story (full of emotion and _correct_ grammar) in order to create a _true_ masterpiece... ... ... good luck! - you'll need it. Now, It might be said that I'm being condescending, but I'm not! I'm offering sage advice here and also the chance for a good beta reader... (as long as it makes sense and is good, you have _no_ idea of how many really bad fics there are,,, I'm being serious - they're more numerable than the celestial bodies traversing the universe.) Now, you may be wondering who I am (so I say check the nick name out) and what my credentials are (check out 'A New Beginning' on Ranma 1/2 and 'Nightfall' on Naruto) and if they are to your liking (in terms of grammar and spelling) then give us a ring. Now, comes the biggest question of all: Who are Ranma's three wives? email is: joe_brenninkmeijer@yahoo.co.uk Wizard Surreal out! P.S. So far so good, you just need to write a teensy weensy bit more - but for a prologue this was fine. :) Am not going to rate this fic, there isn't really anything to rate yet.
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Reviewed By: Sunshynsurfer On: February 11, 2005 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duuude! can't wait til the next chapter comes up. DAMN ur stories are good!
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Reviewed By: darkwoofe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cool, but what I'm really waiting for is to see the senshi's reaction to Ami's fight. Even better, seeing how they react to her father and boyfriend! Looking forward to more.
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Title: Chaos Knight
Reviewed By: HolyKnight On: September 03, 2004 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter man, and you haven't ever tried to write in the Anime Adventure??? the page is: addventure.bast-enterprises.de/
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Reviewed By: jemtlen On: September 02, 2004 03:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I really hope you continue this I find it interesting. Yes it is a little rough but its still better than the most of the stories out there. I think you've done a wonderful job of combining worlds and can't wait to see what you do with the rest of the senshi. I suddenly have pictures of Rei's grandfather as Genkai's (yu yu hakusho)brother or Minako's "Aunt" Felicia (darkstalkers). Usagi's college roomate Utena and her friend Anthy. oops sorry getting of the track good story love to see more of it however long it takes.
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Reviewed By: dragonheart7373 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find this fic rather interesting. I wonder how the Senshi are going to react to Ami and finding out who her father is. There is one thing I would like to see in the future of this fic and that is on what happend to Ranma just before he met Ami. Anyway, I hope to see more of this story soon.
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Reviewed By: reblax On: August 14, 2004 02:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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This is nice. I like how her powers combined into a freezing flame. Please continue because I would also like to see the others reactions and more from the fight.
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Reviewed By: Jackalson On: August 09, 2004 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my... the most vicious fighter to draw breath in the KOF mileu has Mizuno Ami for a daughter. Niiiiiiice. Please don't let this one go, it promises to be very interesting indeed. Thank you for sharing, ~JS
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Reviewed By: an author On: August 09, 2004 14:25 CDT
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nicely done so far. however you continually switch between present and past tense writing prose. please stick to past tense as that is how all works of fiction that are published in book form are created. finally as for Ami's father... i am guessing it is Iori Yagami. either that or someone else you created. i don't have as much knowledge of KoF as most people cause i don't own any of the anime or video games. therefore I can only guess. i do ask you put in the fathers name in the next chapter due to that not everyone is familiar with KoF and the characters. especially with how you describe the character he could be anyone from the series. especially with how many of the fighting styles are very very similar. anyhow ja ne.
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Title: Dying Liquid Mirage
Reviewed By: jemtlen On: August 09, 2004 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great fic. Would really love to see more of this.
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