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| "Days of Hardship" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Great! Love !t ^-^
Reviewed By: Sephy_Valentine On: September 25, 2004 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow.. well, seems like I'm your first reviewer ^_^ Though you definitely deserve more... anyway, so far I really loved it, and you've got me begging for more. Yeah, I really want more, please! It's great. And a very great original character by the way. A lot better than most you see around. Like I said.. yay, uke Raditz! Hm, in the first chapter I obviously liked the entire 'capture' part the most. (Raditz with collar and leash =P Hmmmm...) And the second chapter.. I don't really have to say what I liked, I think =P Anyway, again, I loved the story and I'd really like you to continue it ^_^ (I'll probably bookmark it in my comp's favourites so I can read it later again)
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Reviewed By: Raditzes bride [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 21:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry the fic looks so very sloppy. I'm really new to this site and I have no clue why most of the fic is underlined. I'm trying to figure out why it is, but so far I'm running in a big circle. If any experienced writers of this site might know why, please send a review and also explain why it does this. I'd greatly appreciate it, thanks!
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