| "Unforgivable" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: paralleltodarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good Fic... I can't believe that I didn't review yet... this fic has been on my fave fics list since... quite a few chapters ago... Anyways... I'm sad to see the ending of this Fic... Could you possibly write a sequel?
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Reviewed By: Motje [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 19:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
A sequel could never hurt/ That was really good, atleast I thought so. ^^
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Reviewed By: jeebus [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good, a must read even if you don't like tea bashing
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 12:33 CDT
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Slut Tea has been over used, can't say I'm a big fan of it, but at least the bashing is actually adding to the story. Anyway, besides that, I'm actually enjoying this. Please continue.
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Title: BASH ON!!!
Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooo this fic just keeps on getting better and better!!! i love it!!! omg, tea is such a slut bash her to hell where she belongs!!! plzzzzz let someone kill her, it would be soooooooo happy and im sure so many other people would! anyway, update soon and keep bashin'!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Callie 1075 purrrr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The writing was much better this time!! The bad spelling was still sprinkled here and there, and everywhere, but I enjoyed it a LOT. Please continue soon!!!
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Title: Great storyline, bad grammar
Reviewed By: Callie1075 offline On: August 21, 2004 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The rain shoaked form of a young male stood on a bridge. His head was held in his hands as tears fell freely from his eyes. The white shirt her wore clung to his small form. He had been out there for hours but he had to get out of that house and get some air, wether it was raining or not. He couldn't take much more heart break in his life. When it's the first paragraph of a story, it's kinda important. You've got to fix this. I can't say it's original... it's been done zillions of times. But I enjoyed it a lot, except for the atrocious spelling. Plus, some of the sentences were run-ons.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 19:01 CDT
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Very good. This sounds a bit like shonen-ai, but I can't really tell. Who rejected Yugi? Tea? Hmm... please update soon.
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Reviewed By: MysticDarkFairy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 23:03 CDT
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KEEP GOING OR I WILL SERIOUSLY HURT THE PERSON THAT ISN'T WORKING ON THIS STORY!!!!!!! NAH i'm just kidin ya. I think that the story is good and I really want to know what happens to Yugi. Does he Live Or Die. Don't Know. Pleez don't kill my little Yugi off. I have read to many suicide storys to know what that's like. (READ Runaway by: some lady. I Can't remember name.) Oh Well. Pleez Update soon.
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Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooooooo this is soooooooo good!!! i luv it!!! awwww, plz help yugi mend his soul!!! ooo n make it a yami/yugi fic!!! anyway, update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Zane Darkheart [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Should I continue?" That was what you said at the end of the chapter. Please continue. This chapter was extremely well written, and I need to find out how it ends. Please continue this story, please. Please? Pretty please?
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