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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 15:19 CST
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Hello, I just wanted to tell you that you have the potential for a geart fic here, you do however need to work on your characters, and their emotions. Perhaps a love triangle is in order to make it a bit more intresting... Harry/Kagome/Inuyasha perhaps? Or maybe Abracadabra/Kagome/Inuyasha or something along those lines to make the spark that the fic seems to be lacking of... don't get me wrong this is a good fic, but with a little fine-tuning it could become a great one insted, either way I hope to see you again soon With Love, Mari-chan
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Reviewed By: ShappireGems [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 14:05 CDT
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great new chapter!! so whats the good dead going to be? update more soon!
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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 20:49 CDT
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Oh, and if the crush DOES happen, I don't think Kagoem should fall in love w/ Harry. I like the Inu/Kag pariing just fine, thank you. Harry just seems like someone who would have an overinflated ego. lol ^^ Anyway, THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE!!!!!!!! ^^ I am so happy, I think I will laugh for no reason!!!!!!! lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol
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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 19:00 CDT
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For some reason, whenever I read a IY and HP xover, it makes me laugh. I think you should have Harry fall in love with Kagome, so he and Inuyasha get into fights, etc. you get it right? I'll be back when u update!
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 13:34 CDT
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well this is very interesting!!! update more soon plz!!!!!
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