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| "Thieves of Makai" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Title: I am YYHGirl
Reviewed By: SilverWhiteWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 03:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, I don't know if you have chosen me or not, but either way, can you PLEASE update this story? It sounds very interesting to me and I would really like to read it. Can you please update?
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Reviewed By: karenkim201 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 00:53 CST
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name:suki you make up last name up age:16 spieces:demon hieght:5'6 Complexion:healthy peach but sometimes look pale Eye Color:chacolate brown eyes Hair Color:brown Hairstyle:a high pony tale not to tight not to loose or a french braid Weapons:sythe and katana Attacks:shadows of fear/it makes hand shaped shadows come out of the ground and drags you down to the depths of hell. reflection/it makes 5 of me and each is just as powerful as the other mind control/can mind control people and demons Personality:loyal to all my friends/companions My friends can always trust my to help them when they need help most.I am also pretty funny But get me pissed the least you can expect is a broken leg and arm Clothes:black baggy pants and a black t-shirt with a wite long sleeved under it History:My mom died in a fire and I killed my so called 'father' I became a thief for a couple of reasons 1.I loved the rush 2.I couldn't afford the stuff. extra info:My 'father' would always abuse me and call my bitch whore slut stuff like that and one day he was taunting me that my mom was a slut and a worthless bitch (mother died in fire) I got mad and killed him with a knife(didn't know how to a sythe or a katana back then.)so yeah wat to be paired with:Hiei or kurama but pleaze hiei
| Reviewed By: YYHGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
P.S. I hope you pick me, please!!!!!!!!!! ^^
| Reviewed By: YYHGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... Please update as soon as you possibly can!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: Still continueing...
Reviewed By: YYHGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 23:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
But ever since then I havent seen my sisters and I don't even know if they're still alive. And I remember my mother because of the red choker she gave me. And Siga, my demon cat, is all I have left to smile for... Other things I might need to know about: Maybe you might use this, every three years anger builds up inside me and when I need to let it out, depending on what mood I'm in at the time, my form changes(If you chose me, and use this information in your story I'll e-mail my different forms for my different moods to you, but tell me if you want to use it first, okay? My e-mail address is MBIGRick7774@aol.com) I also have a demon cat(like Kilala from Inuyasha) named Siga. And a red choker that is VERY preciouse to me. Paired with: 1.)Kurama 2.)Jin (PLEASE let it be Kurama though!) Please pick meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! I'll cry if you don't! No, really I will.
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Reviewed By: YYHGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Formal outfit): (Think Yuna from Final Fantasy X's outfit).(Fighting outfit): A fighting kimono, red on the bottom and white on the top(basically the same thing that Kikyo from Inuyasha wears).(Bathing suit): Red swim shorts(trunks) and a blue swim top. History: A long time ago my parents died trying to protect me and I had to go live in a village were water demons dwell and I was an outcast because of my psychic side, but my sisters, Ayaka(she is a full water demon and my older sister), and Somagi(she is a full psychic demon and my younger sister, but she doesn't live in the water demon village), wanted to help me. But I knew if anyone else knew that they were my sisters that everyone would hurt them too, so I never let them help me. One day when a demon attacked while some demon kids were beating me and they were so afraid, but I killed the demon to protect them. As I grew older everyone saw me differently, like a hero or something. But when I went to ask the elders of the village a simple question I over heard them talking,"We have that foolish little baka in our grasp!" one of them said. "Yes, she's doing all the work by saving the village, but we're the ones who the power over her! She'll never know that 'we' are the ones who sent the demon to kill her parents! Hahahahaha!!!" So I went in and killed them all and ran away from the village and to get back at every single person I ever saved I became the thing that they fear! But ever since then I havent seen my sisters an | Title: Can I come, PLEASE?!
Reviewed By: YYHGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Ashley(Ash) Mimamato Age: 14 (+500 Demon years) Species: 2 and 1/2 Water,1 and 1/2 Psychic Demon Height: 5'4" Complexion: A little lighter than Kurama Eye Color: Blue (Sapphire) Hair Color: Black Hairstyle: It's down, but short like Kairi's hair from Kingdom Hearts Weapons: Bow and arrows and a clear matalic sword. Attacks: Spirit Blades: I form my spirit energy into blades that can cut through anything. I have different psychic glows, Angry: Red, Sad/suffering: Blue, Happy: White. Ash's Spell: It's a spell that I put on my arrows before I shoot them and when the arrow hits the enemy the spell shocks them instanty to death. Destiny Stab: It's a powerful attack. It's when I stab my sword into the ground and a bright white light comes from a bunch of cracks in the ground and it's my opponents 'destiny' to fall between the cracks and never rise again, but it won't hurt the rest of the crew, only the people I choose will go down. Personality: When I'm with the other thieves I'm unmercieful and cold to the people we steel from, but I 'alway' fight honorabley. But when I'm not with them I'm gentle and sometimes I wonder to myself if this is the right thing to do. I'm also VERY VERY determind has a lot of stamina, and courage, and is clever. Protective of her demon cat and her red choker. Clothes: (PJ's): Yellow thick strap sleeping shirt and dark blue pants.(Casual outfit): Blood-red hooded short sleeve shirt with sort of baggy tan pants and black half-finger gloves.(Formal o | Reviewed By: WindDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 23:15 CDT
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sent mine through email...if ya need anything else email me at pyrokitty31909@aol.com
| Reviewed By: dark_necromancer_0000000 On: August 21, 2004 21:29 CDT
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bump
| Reviewed By: dark_necromancer_0000000 On: August 21, 2004 21:28 CDT
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Name:Ashley Nicole Summers Age:17 (in human years if human, in appearance if youkai) Species:Human (Human or Youkai) Height:5'6 Complexion:pale (tan, pale, dark, etc) Eye Color:forest green Hair Color:snow white Hairstyle:straight worn in braid...waist length Weapons:needles Attacks:needle throw-throws needle at pressure points in body and paralyzes or kills them,physcic-controls items around her,normal street fighting-kicking&punching etc... (include name and Description) Personality:kind,caring,protective,unpredictable,determined Clothes:white jeans,green t-shirt with the words "I want you" which get smaller and then it says "to leave me alone"...sneakers,fingerless gloves (P.j.'s, casual outfit, formal outfit, fighting outfit, bathing suit) History:lives with mother,father was killed by demons and she seeks to get revenge (why she's a thief, what her past was like, etc) Other things I might need to know about:i'm kinda gothic and really smart,and i love babies (randomness) Paired with: (name at least 2 guys)Touya,Teen Koenma
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Reviewed By: Vampiress_Lullaby [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 13:44 CDT
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yup...just reading my reviews....damn it all.
| Reviewed By: hieiscarf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 23:39 CDT
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if you need any more info email me at Caffienenut121@aol.com
| Reviewed By: hieiscarf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 23:38 CDT
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History: Her parents were killed when a demon attacked their village she was left to take care of her to younger siblings from a young age seeing as noone would help them out because they always thought that she brought bad luck she was forced into being a thieve to take care of her siblings. when she wasnt that good she didnt take care of her siblings the way she thought that she should so she went into a random kitsune village and left them on some ones door step she then went to get better so she could go back for them but when she did go back she found out the a couple days after she left the village was attacked and the only ones to die were her siblings. Other: weaknesses: when some one looks like my siblings, when they have siblings that they need to take care of. strengths: anger Paired with:Jin, Hiei, or Yusuke
| Reviewed By: hieiscarf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 23:33 CDT
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Name:Kit Age:17 Species:Half Cat demon half Fire apparition Height: 4'7 Complexion: tan Eye Color: Sky blue Hair Color: Black with red tips Hairstyle: Its always down and goes down to the small of my back Weapons: Katana and Whip Attacks: Fire whip and it is when i make a whip using my fire powers. I also can control any type of plants kinda like Kurama except i cant make them grow any faster i can control already living ones. Personality: if some one earns my trust then i will protect them with my life i show emotions only around those i care about. I have a really short temper. i go off on ppl for almost anything. i have a big mouth and i like to talk crap Clothes:p.j.'s: Black silk pajamma pants. wit a blood red tank top that says 'If you are reading this it must mean you have a death wish' and a pair of black fuzzy slippers. Casual outfit: hiphugger blue jean bellbottoms. a Black long sleeve shirt. the sleeves flare at the bottom in sliver letters it says 'Im a bitch deal with it' and black boots with an 1/2 inch heel. Formal outfit: Long black spegetti straped dress that goes to the floor with two slits one on each side that goes up to right above my knees.With a pair of black boots that go up to my knees wit an in. heel. fighting outfit: Youko Kurama's but black and well for a female. Swim suit: Black bikini
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Reviewed By: Vampiress Lullaby On: August 12, 2004 10:45 CDT
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