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| "Thieves of Makai" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Title: ---
Reviewed By: Vampiress Lullaby On: August 12, 2004 10:45 CDT
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reading reviews
| Title: My Character
Reviewed By: KYOangel On: August 12, 2004 00:26 CDT
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NAME:Kasumi or Sumi.Age:16(h)321(d)HEIGHT:5'4 COMPLEXION:slightly tanned.EYE COLOR:purple w/ silver flecks.HAIR COLOR:Silver w/ purple streaks and tips,to her knees.HAIRSTYLE:in braid when fighting or on the job,when not down or a half ponty-tail.WEAPONS:2 katanas,silver energy whip, poison daggers,claws.ATTACKS:Kitsune bi-u know right?2 sword slash-uses amazing speed and slashes w/ both swords;Dagger Death-hits them w/ a dagger and they melt from the inside out.PERSONALITY:cold to everyone but her team,or clan,very protective, doesn't trust easily,quick-tempered,when made she is really scary.CLOTHES:u pick as long as they are:Black,Silver,Red,Purple,or gold.HISTORY:her clan was killed when she was 11(h)and she yearns for revenge,but that does not fuel her actions, only some people have managed to gain her trust,i would be a good leader!!^___________________^ OTHER INFO:purple fox ears and 5 silver tails w/ purple tips and in some random places. PAIRED WITH:Kurama,Hiei,or Jin i know u said 2 i was just sayin u can pick which one!!^^
| Title: My Character
Reviewed By: KYOangel On: August 12, 2004 00:24 CDT
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NAME:Kasumi or Sumi.Age:16(h)321(d)HEIGHT:5'4 COMPLEXION:slightly tanned.EYE COLOR:purple w/ silver flecks.HAIR COLOR:Silver w/ purple streaks and tips,to her knees.HAIRSTYLE:in braid when fighting or on the job,when not down or a half ponty-tail.WEAPONS:2 katanas,silver energy whip, poison daggers,claws.ATTACKS:Kitsune bi-u know right?2 sword slash-uses amazing speed and slashes w/ both swords;Dagger Death-hits them w/ a dagger and they melt from the inside out.PERSONALITY:cold to everyone but her team,or clan,very protective, doesn't trust easily,quick-tempered,when made she is really scary.CLOTHES-PJ:silver belly shirt and purple boxers;Fighting:black baggy pants w/dark violet belly shirt,no shoes;formal:black kimono w/ a red dragon,wooden sandals;Casual:leather low rise jeans,heel combat boots,and a silver tank;B.S:2 piece,purple w/ silver and black swirls. HISTORY:her clan was killed when she was 11(h)and she yearns for revenge,but that does not fuel her actions, only some people have managed to gain her trust,i would be a good leader!!^___________________^ OTHER INFO:purple fox ears and 5 silver tails w/ purple tips and in some random places. PAIRED WITH:Kurama,Hiei,or Jin i know u said 2 i was just sayin u can pick which one!!^^Anything else you can choose.
| Reviewed By: Rey Yukimora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 19:01 CDT
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i hope you pick me...^_^
| Reviewed By: The Youkai Nightmare [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 13:40 CDT
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Once again, I am helping her read reviews. If you have a problem with that, sue me.
| Title: continued
Reviewed By: Rey Yukimora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 00:29 CDT
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[[this is continued from last post]] History: she grew up with a clan of thieves. her father was a master thief and was the leader of the clan. once she was forced to destroy her own clan, she set out on a journey to become a master thief, just like her father. Other things I might need to know about: she is a half fox, half ice demon. she has cute little fox ears on top of her head. she also has a silver fox tail with blue streaks in them. she has fangs, 2 on the top and 2 on the bottom, that can tear flesh apart. she uses her speed to cleverly get behind her opponents, and then shoots them down with her bow and arrow. she has claws that can cut down and enemy without even touching them. the speed of the attack creates powerful winds that can tear the opponent's skin, even tho it had no contact. her blood is a very very dark red color, darker than normal blood. Paired with: hiei or kurama, but i perfer hiei.
| Reviewed By: Rey Yukimora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 00:28 CDT
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Name: Mayura Tatsuki Age: 220 appears 17 Species: youkai, ice fox Height: 4'6" Complexion: a little bit pale, her face is almost white, and she is a bit on the skinny side. without all that weight, she is able to run extreamly fast, resulting in a fast and quick blur. Eye Color: red Hair Color: icey blue Hairstyle: think kikyo from inuyasha, and tied with a red ribbon. Weapons: a silver bow and arrow with sapphires and rubies attached onto it. she can make extra arrows out of ice. she can also make any weapons out of ice, but she favor's sango's weapon, hiraikotsu, a giant boomerang. Attacks: Ice Storm- summons an ice/snow storm and destroys everything around her within a 500 ft radius. (able to make weapons out of ice) -ice spear, a regular spear out of ice that she uses to attack her ememies. kind of like a sword. -giant boomerang, she is able to throw the damn thing and slice her opponents to pieces. Ice blast- she can create an explosion and freeze her opponents in the process. she can alos change the temperature around her to freeze her enemies. Personality: distant, but loyal. she can be playful at times, but she's always careful. she is very sly and clever. Clothes: her pj's, casual, formal, and fighting outfits are the same, a blue'white kimono that is cut at the shoulders, but then continues at the elbows (think Yuna from final fantasy X) her bathing suit is a black and white bikini. History: she grew up with a clan of thieves. her father was a master thief and was t | Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: The Youkai Nightmare [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
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helping her read reviews
| Title: Umm...
Reviewed By: The Youkai Nightmare [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 18:35 CDT
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^_^
| Title: Haha
Reviewed By: The Youkai Nightmare [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 18:27 CDT
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I'll read it! I'm submitting a character through e-mail.
| Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: dark_demon_princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 17:29 CDT
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Email me at demongirl_hiei@yahoo.com if you need anything else
| Title: E-MAIL
Reviewed By: dark_demon_princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 17:28 CDT
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| Title: Please can i join!?
Reviewed By: dark_demon_princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NAME:Ashley AGE:13 DEMON AGE:313 HIGHT:5'3" HAIR COLOR:Brown with crimson stereks(sholder length hair) DEMON HAIR:Pure black with white bangs(goes down to knees) HUMAN EYE COLOR:Amber DEMON EYE COLOR:Crimson TYPE:Half fire demon(black) and half ice demon LIKES:Reading,writing,drawing,trianing,and fights(they rule!) DISLIKES:My enemies,made fun of,and losing WEAKNESS:My adopted family(was left to die by real family at age 5) PERSONALITY:Is a bitch when people don't know me. Has a locked up heart cuz of real family. Doesn't show any emotions. I become a lil nicer when i git to know people. CLOTHES:Your choice, as long as its black,silver,blue,and crimson PEOPLE I LIKE TO BE PAIRED UP WITH:Hiei or Kurama
| Title: I'm sorry to waste your review >.>
Reviewed By: Veloura [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 17:18 CDT
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I sent you an email for the character Adamina Knowl, and I forgot (i'm such a moron) to type in the one line "she's a theif because she hopes to obtain something to either resurect her family" and also she steals to keep herself alive, I don't think theres major history required there. I'm so sorry, but for somereason It won't let me send another email >.>
| Reviewed By: Kimba On: August 09, 2004 16:36 CDT
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Name: Chosha Age:15( human) 150( Demon i hope i did that right) Species: ice/Loin Youkai Height:5'9 Complexion: tan Eye Color: seagreen with a black slits( think a pissed of cat) Hair Color:sliver with black at the tips and black bangs Hairstyle:in a braid ponytail, with a sliver bow. Weapons:bow and sliver tiped arrows, a shaff that is also a sword. Attacks: Ice wave( Waves a fan and a blast over coldice shots out) Spirt Cannon ( puts hand togeter and fire a red ball of power like a cannon) Mirror( turnes into the person she is fighting) Icc cage( A cage of ice from and traps the peron she is fighting) Personality: brave, sly, sexly, and Deadly, Loves to take anything that is shiny( her one weakness), will help her friends if they need it, and Akts anyone who tried to take her Jewels Clothes: P.j.'s: ice blue with snow all over them. Casual outfit: a white top with blue jeans, and black boots, and fingerless gloves. Formal outfit: a white chinese outfit with bluearound the neck, and bottom of it. and white glover that stop at elbow. Fighting outfit: a white look a like of Inuyasha outfit . Bathing suit: blue with a loin on the back History: Chosha is the only child of a ice demon named Rika, but becase she was half lion, Chosha was sent to go live with her father, who was a thief. he showed her how to be a thief, after he died, Chosha started to steal thing of Koenma, Paired with: Yusuke or Jin if you need anything My email is snowfoxneo14@aol.com
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