| "Breaking The Light" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: dark as hell, nuff said
Reviewed By: damien black [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its pretty good. You should've had him rape tea (anzu) multiple times in the fanfic and have the fanfic be longer than it was but other than that, you did pretty good. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: person.... On: November 26, 2004 20:47 CST
Comment/Review:
^_^ Good! Hn, maybe Merik should do this to her again...but accidenlty got her pregnant! O_O Just an idea.
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Title: aww, yay!
Reviewed By: someone! ^_^ [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ This is DIS aka LittleBaku, wow! This is great! ;_; I am so happy you used the idea! Yay! It was very nice...O_O And dark, I could never have written something like this! ^^ Ta ta!
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