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| "Moonlight" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: *starts sobbing*
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 05:22 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG I'm such a wuss. My favorite character has aways been Ryo... and I only read the summary and I was ready to cry... so I need to go read some fluffy smut now... um, if the random queen liked it, you must kick ass so, *shrugs* yeah.
| Reviewed By: MornMeril On: May 20, 2005 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked the beginning of this story, and though i like Dee/Ryo i', lately somewhat obsessed with Dee/Berkely. it's a shame that there aren't more fictions with the two of them around. i'm playing with the idea of writing a story about them myself... we'll see. i have a plot already, so... well back to your story you should really keep it up, maybe describe things a bit better (emontions etc.). i hope you won't give this story up! bes wishes
| Title: i like it
Reviewed By: The Random Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, in some weird, twisted way . . . I really like this fic. And, this is a horrible thing to say, but I liked the fact that Ryo killed himself. In my eyes, it's all a matter of time . . . oh. and the pairing I've only seen once, and it was pretty good. So . . . please continue! Me likes bunches!
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