Reviewed By: NekoCeles [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm... What can I say about a fanfiction that I have no idea what is going on in... It's very... creative? I think the CIA has found some magical ball that has brought the cast into the future, but I can't tell, really. You need to use quotes-"I am saying this," said Neko Celes. You need a beta reader. : )
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