| "Kikyo's Rage and Kagome's pain" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Miroku8900 On: August 13, 2004 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty interesting but the first two chapters could have been one chapter even then it would have been kind of short. This is an interesting story and I would like to read more, please try to finish
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Reviewed By: Michiru13 On: August 13, 2004 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it but you have to admit that you could have make your chapter a little bit longer, please write the next chapeter soon.
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Reviewed By: solecito On: August 13, 2004 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your fanfic, please try to finish and please tell me that you are sending that witch to hell again (without inuyasha of course)
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Reviewed By: Alimm On: August 11, 2004 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not too bad. You might want to think about putting some paragraphs instead of making all one paragraph. Some "breaks" between the different people talking would make it easier to read. Oh and maybe make the chapters a bit longer? This is pretty interesting but the first two chapters could have been one chapter even then it would have been kind of short. I gave a 7 for the originality because I have actually read several stories along these same lines so until you post more and it turns out different from what I have already read it only rates a 7 on that. Like I said paragraphs would be good. But this is still good keep writing. Update soon
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Reviewed By: PJ On: August 11, 2004 03:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
well why can't we just review why do we have to send it in an email? This is an interesting story and I would like to read more but unless I know that you can not read your reviews on this site I am just going to submit it here. with all the virus' out that access email addresses from you email program these days I am not emailing to someone I don't know personally. *sorry* This is good please update
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