| "What You Wouldn't Expect" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Fanboy squeel
Reviewed By: DarKDaYe On: September 28, 2015 22:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the most epic and heartfelt fanfic I have ever read. The
amount of detail and work put into this story was more than most
authors. though I am Biased; What you Wouldn't expect was the first
fanfiction I ever read and inspired me to keep reading, including
the two other stories that go along with this one. after reading
this for the first time in 2009 and the site you posted to was
takin' down, I have searched everywhere for this story! So happy I
finally found it.
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Title: The story so far.
Reviewed By: Crimson Warrior On: August 04, 2005 12:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is funny but why did you make Bulma not sluty but she kinda is? This is awsome so far.
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Me On: July 28, 2005 04:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man I love this story!!! Update now! Now I say!!
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Title: the whole story
Reviewed By: Crimson warrior On: June 30, 2005 13:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good just DON'T HAVE VIDEL DIE OR ANYONE DIE OR BECOME ETERNALY CRIPLED!!!!!! Oh and update soon........
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Title: new chapters
Reviewed By: Erica Daniels On: June 10, 2005 13:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
These are good but I did not like how you made Goku, Veg, and Gohan seem weak and how the Majin Buu team strong. Also try and have at least three lemon sceans with Gohan and Videl for your next set of chapters!
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Title: Best story Ever
Reviewed By: demi-legend On: June 03, 2005 19:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is definitely one of the best stories out there, anywhere and everywhere. A MUST read. Congratulations for creating such a masterpiece. I loved reading the entire story in your site.
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Reviewed By: Omega_Red9 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 21:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I remember reading this before. In fact, this is the story that got me so interested in fan fics all together. So thank you. For those of you who haven't read the story, it is a MUST read for any DBZ fan.
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Reviewed By: aiyana [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 13:00 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading your stories, I've found it in your website ( which is very good by the way), keep going!
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Reviewed By: VidelsLuver On: March 07, 2005 19:04 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay. You just made my day. You have no idea how happy I am now that I've found this story. I was a huge fan of your story on FFNet, and I just about CRIED after you took it off. Can't say I blame you though, lol, FFNet sucks. I can't really say keep it up on this story since it's already finished, so keep it up on your other stories. They're really good.
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Reviewed By: fsdafas On: February 13, 2005 18:43 PST
Comment/Review:
update soon this is awesome
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Title: This is the one i want
Reviewed By: Hot Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 23:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
Yes this time i reviewed the right one i want more and i want long chapters too.
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