| "'Do You Want to Live Forever?'" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: lere [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 13:22 CST
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Well... now you have one more review, hehe. This fic is so interesting. Veru different from the others you ever wrote and I'm glad to see how flexible is your creative mind. You'r style is always improving. Congratulations my dear sensei! Lere
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: Mangetsu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 18:11 CST
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Thank you everyone for your support of this story. I appreciate everyone who is reading and reviewing. God Bless and Merry Christmas. Tsuki-san aka Mangetsu
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Title: catti-dono
Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 17:18 CST
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Man; almost wish Saitou wasnt a bad guy; he was so hot...laughs...dodges thrown fruit....what can I saw its a damn good chapter...I most definitely keep you posted on my hate of Yahiko-CHAN.....catti-dono (baka deshi of Tsuki-sama sensai)
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Reviewed By: lere [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 15:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... I don't know if you are forgiven... I'll have to ask Battousai. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Sensei, I know Saito must love you right now. I didn't have any interest in Saito/Tokio lemons until a started reading your fics. I allways liked Saito as a caracter. He is some kind of anti hero, dark, letal but with a hight moral code. I love this lemon. Big hugs my dear friend! Lere
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Reviewed By: Kaoru__890 On: November 29, 2004 09:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Tsuki-San, this is Kaoru__890, for some reason im not being allowed to review on FF.net, so my review for 'The Bad Kid' will be here too. Well here goes. 'The Bad Kid' I love the the chapter you put up, it was awsome, well im finally out of band, so thats good, i just moved, so everythings kinda hectic right now, moved from FL to TN, *sad face* but anyway, love the story, keep updating. oh, and you should put this story on MM.Org, im sure it'd be a big hit. 'Do you want to live forever' I love this story, its so cool, you make it come alive, so keep up the good work, and dont worry, i dont think anyone could call you old, your just too cool for that. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: catti-dono(bakadeshi) On: November 16, 2004 20:18 CST
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Baka mediaminer and not letting me read like one of my favorite stories (haha one of several that are written by somebody named Tsuki-san) (giggles)...Well my Tovarus (might as well hang with the words in this story) this is very, very good!! I wish you would have let Enishi try to attack Kauro, would have loved to see that whole protection thing go off on hime; evil laughter....but I guess we can wait until Yahiko (BOOM) HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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Reviewed By: lere [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, sensei! I think now, after this hot, sexy, lovely lemon, our Battousai can forgive you about that Kaoru/Aoshi affair. You know how much I love lemons about KK, so... Big hugs my dear friend! Lere
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Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story! You should have way more reviews. I plan to write a plug for peeps (who like RK) to read this as a note at the end of my story.
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Reviewed By: Cliodhna Glen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an interesting story! Unique A/U fics are hard to come by. If I had one suggestion it would be "show, don't tell". You started out the fic with a rather lengthy description of what the vampires were &etc - it's better for both the story and the audience if you creatively work that in to the meat of the fic - have those details come out through dialog, character interaction, setting, plot devices, etc. Building fics this way also helps to eliminate the feeling that the audience is being "told" what's going on and gives a greater sense that they are "seeing" what's going on, which makes for smoother pacing and a better reading experience. This fic definitely has a lot of potential, it just needs to be tweaked up a bit. :)
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Reviewed By: elisa ang On: October 25, 2004 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!! u updated!!! and it was just as excellent as always!!!! please do continue this story it is simply amazing!!!!!One of the best rk works ive read!!!
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Reviewed By: catti-dono(bakadeshi) On: October 25, 2004 18:32 CDT
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Tsuki-sama sensai: Of course updating my two fav stories counts...This is a great chapter (cant wait for Hiko to apologize, giggles, evil, evil).
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Reviewed By: Dana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 15:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shit. Damn good story. Man, you so did not end it right there!! Normally i dont like vampire story's on fanfictions, i like vampire books, but not fanfictions, but this is really good.heheheh well update as soon as possible. Kaoru__890 ^_^
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Reviewed By: shatteredjade On: October 07, 2004 21:47 CDT
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i can honestly say i have never read a better alternate universe rurouni kenshin fan fiction. and as depressing as it is that you have gotten less than adequate reviews you just CANNOT give up! i was wondering, is there a place you are getting the happenings of the creation of the angels, is it in a book or something? or does it come from your awe- inspiring imagination? please dont give up on this fic. ive been telling everyone and their mother about this fic and i seriously hope they listen to me and read it. cuz if they dont im gonna hunt them down.... ah fun fun. best wishes and please update ASAP!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Sarcastic Sympathy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 10:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I love your fanfic...its brilliant, you should try posting it on the fanfiction.net you'd get lots more publiciy.
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Reviewed By: elisa On: September 14, 2004 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god i dont eeven know wat to write,,,,,,,, this has got to be the best fabfic i have ever read...ever!!!!! you are fantastic!!!! its so perfect it should be published!!! at least you defineatly know at youre doin wit ur life!!!
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