| "'Do You Want to Live Forever?'" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: catti-dono(bakadeshi) On: November 16, 2004 20:18 CST
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Baka mediaminer and not letting me read like one of my favorite stories (haha one of several that are written by somebody named Tsuki-san) (giggles)...Well my Tovarus (might as well hang with the words in this story) this is very, very good!! I wish you would have let Enishi try to attack Kauro, would have loved to see that whole protection thing go off on hime; evil laughter....but I guess we can wait until Yahiko (BOOM) HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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Reviewed By: lere [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, sensei! I think now, after this hot, sexy, lovely lemon, our Battousai can forgive you about that Kaoru/Aoshi affair. You know how much I love lemons about KK, so... Big hugs my dear friend! Lere
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Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story! You should have way more reviews. I plan to write a plug for peeps (who like RK) to read this as a note at the end of my story.
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Reviewed By: Cliodhna Glen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an interesting story! Unique A/U fics are hard to come by. If I had one suggestion it would be "show, don't tell". You started out the fic with a rather lengthy description of what the vampires were &etc - it's better for both the story and the audience if you creatively work that in to the meat of the fic - have those details come out through dialog, character interaction, setting, plot devices, etc. Building fics this way also helps to eliminate the feeling that the audience is being "told" what's going on and gives a greater sense that they are "seeing" what's going on, which makes for smoother pacing and a better reading experience. This fic definitely has a lot of potential, it just needs to be tweaked up a bit. :)
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Reviewed By: elisa ang On: October 25, 2004 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!! u updated!!! and it was just as excellent as always!!!! please do continue this story it is simply amazing!!!!!One of the best rk works ive read!!!
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Reviewed By: catti-dono(bakadeshi) On: October 25, 2004 18:32 CDT
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Tsuki-sama sensai: Of course updating my two fav stories counts...This is a great chapter (cant wait for Hiko to apologize, giggles, evil, evil).
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Reviewed By: Dana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 15:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shit. Damn good story. Man, you so did not end it right there!! Normally i dont like vampire story's on fanfictions, i like vampire books, but not fanfictions, but this is really good.heheheh well update as soon as possible. Kaoru__890 ^_^
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Reviewed By: shatteredjade On: October 07, 2004 21:47 CDT
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i can honestly say i have never read a better alternate universe rurouni kenshin fan fiction. and as depressing as it is that you have gotten less than adequate reviews you just CANNOT give up! i was wondering, is there a place you are getting the happenings of the creation of the angels, is it in a book or something? or does it come from your awe- inspiring imagination? please dont give up on this fic. ive been telling everyone and their mother about this fic and i seriously hope they listen to me and read it. cuz if they dont im gonna hunt them down.... ah fun fun. best wishes and please update ASAP!
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Reviewed By: Sarcastic Sympathy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 10:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I love your fanfic...its brilliant, you should try posting it on the fanfiction.net you'd get lots more publiciy.
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Reviewed By: elisa On: September 14, 2004 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god i dont eeven know wat to write,,,,,,,, this has got to be the best fabfic i have ever read...ever!!!!! you are fantastic!!!! its so perfect it should be published!!! at least you defineatly know at youre doin wit ur life!!!
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Reviewed By: Nguardian On: August 27, 2004 01:19 CDT
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Forgive me for not rating, I think you can tell already what I would give, and my thoughts rarely change throughout a story that I enjoy. As always an awesome job, and my full support is given. But I must say you are an evil woman, leaving cliff hangers like this all over the place. I nearly exploded with anticipation with where you left us. But I guess one must keep us hanging on the edge of our seats so I will endure this torture of not knowing and wait patiently for the next chapter. Until next time. Later.
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Reviewed By: elisa ang On: August 22, 2004 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is absolutely extraordinary.....theres really not much else i can say, im sure youve already heard it many times before so im just goin to tell you that you have amazing talent and that this fic is going places!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sephiress On: August 18, 2004 16:47 CDT
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w00t w00t!!!!! yay, it's so awesome to see you have updated both on M.M. and AFF. i already shot u a review on aff but theres nuthin like a double shot to boost egos ya know. can't wait til Kenni makes his entrance into the 'clan' and i can just picture Hiko's face when he see's the great 'Cel's' stature and height...or lack of i should say (i'm laughing already). oh and dont make fun of Kenshin in glasses...I thought it was cute...little gold framed glasses on his nose....kawaii! (not as cute as sum1 else *cough* aoshi-sama! *cough*) oh well, i was destined for saitoh remember LOL oh no i'm rambling again, lol i will save that for lata keep up the awesome work my friend Sephiress
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Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 16:59 CDT
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Mangetsu-sama sensi: Here I am and by Kami that was a great chapt; cannot want to see Hiko's face when he meets 'Cel'. So are you going to do the thing with Yahiko?? (giggles) Remember in the end all "Made" go poof!!! (giggles again) Bows and beats her head on the floor catti
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Reviewed By: Nguardian On: August 12, 2004 07:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jeez, girl. You're just all over the place aren't you? Just trying to be supportive of you. How many times am I going to have to review the same chapter over and over, now that all three locations are at the same place? Don't worry I don't mind doing it. I'm just concerned on what I'll say. I'll try to say something unique for each review, hopefully it will be something new that I noticed about the chapter that went unnoticed the first time around. Well, here's to one of many reviews to come and sipping drinks by the pool. Until my next review of the same chapter. lol Later.
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