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| "Sometimes it's just too late" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: stillindentured On: August 11, 2004 21:45 CDT
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(srry, my review got cut off, heh heh....went 298 characters over the limit oops. lol.) -ine thought provoking issues throughout. it was real, correct, and commendable. thanx for writing such a great fic, plz continue with ur updates. ^^ p.s. im a fellow writer of fanfiction, and would like to talk to sumone 'bout it...my AIM sn is 'falliblefortunes'. have a nice day! ^^
| Reviewed By: indentured On: August 11, 2004 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very unique story, and i love it for that. The ratings i've given it were very justified and not just some stamps of flacid-approval stamped onto any old piece of fiction. NO, they were vmeticulously calculated and found agreeable as the only label this amazing piece of work could attain. your style of writing earned the highest marks due to the intricate way u layed out ur story with it and yet kept the text itself very simple and comprehensable. i luv how u started out with comparing duo to a building, the symbolism is so lurid and yet even if one couldn't see that far into the depths they could still understand the feeling represented. Ur spelling and grammar...was impecable. that's all that really need b said. The originality/creativity of ur fic lay in the fact that u took an anime series notorious for being abused by fanfiction-ists that can't admit to themselves that they are without ability to actualy write anything of merit, let alone plausibility, intimacy (in the true, heartfelt sense of real life and not just sex), raw truthfulness. Wut i liked most about ur story was how well it conveyed feelings, and how real the feelings were (real as in, in actual life one can expect to see ppl react with these such emotions and not the irrational ones staining most gw fics). the enjoyment factor was a combination of all three litrature elements stated and analyzed above. this fic was fast paced enough to keep the reader enthralled and yet moderated enough to intertw | Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good writing. Good plot. Fits from beginning till the end. Wonderfull!!
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