| "Out There" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Serenitychan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: Serenitychan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 12:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
>.< Like I've been saying, Katie... YOUR TYPING IS HORRIBLE! Sorry to be blunt but you need a beta reader! Why not ask me or Matthew? All in all, the idea is good! You've even got me hooked!
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Title: Prologue review
Reviewed By: Mailer Daemon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very interesting idea. The disney movie is one of my personal favorites, so I think I will enjoy this. Just be sure to use a little more characterization. Keep up the good work, and I'll be checking back soon.
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