| "Unholy Order" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Smaffa On: October 31, 2011 12:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are too few Arc the Lad: ToS fanfictions out there, and even fewer that I enjoy as much as I do your particular story. I'm glad you decided to share it despite expectations of low readership. Please do not let that discourage you and I hope to see this story truly completed one day. This story is very well written and interesting, so I look forward to any more of it you choose to share. |
Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Soul_Eater_94 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 11:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEeeeeeeeeeee!!! I love this story! It is such an interesting read, good on ya!
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Reviewed By: Kye/11255 On: November 30, 2004 18:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I review again.^_^ I liked the chapter it was interesting. I like how Kharg explained things. Please continue this soon.
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Reviewed By: Kye/11255 On: November 23, 2004 17:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay you updated. I liked the chapter,I hope you continue this as soon as you can.^_^
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Reviewed By: "Look, I'm a fountain!" On: November 21, 2004 14:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am soooooooooooo glad I finally found this story!!! These are great. I already read the prologue and the first chapter so now I actually got to read the second. I thought you had a lot more done though... Oh well! This rocks!!
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Title: Oh wow
Reviewed By: Yamainu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 23:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good story! I wrote one too -points to 'Road in the Darc'.- But anyway... I reviewed this on fanfiction already, but thought you'd like a review here too! You're story is very well written, and the sisters in there are very interesting... it's a funny story ^^ please review soon.
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Reviewed By: Kye/11255 On: November 11, 2004 18:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi I liked your story. It is interesting sofar and I also don't mind the paring it is going to be. So please continue the story.
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Reviewed By: Emperor Zaige On: October 27, 2004 23:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read your summary of how you don't think anyone will read your fic. For what it's worth I think your fic is quite original and ellegantly written, and I hope you don't abbandon it. My only complaint would be the lack of quotations during speaking parts and the underlines throughout the story. Other than that, I find it quite intriguing. I love Arc the Lad: Twilight of the Spirits and I would like to have fanfiction for it that I may enjoy. This is the first bit of fanfiction I have found after many long, fruitless searches. And in addition to that, it is well written. If you do plan to give up on it, do so because you tire of it and not because there are few readers. I will read it. And I don't ussually comment on stories, but you are writing a quality story for such an underexplored fandom and I don't want it to stop too terribly soon.
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