| "nightmares" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Nice!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: malchior [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 09:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, the best i have read yet and keep going!!!!
|
Reviewed By: your editor On: November 24, 2004 09:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Some things are missing after the periods, I don't know how that happened. *Frowns* is there any way to space the stuff out a bit and not have it in italics?
|
Reviewed By: SilentDeath [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 19:36 CST
Comment/Review:
You really need to make longer chapters.
|
Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 20:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
i can bata (edit) your fic.
|
Reviewed By: angelbaby1 On: August 27, 2004 14:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey! I like the concept you've come up with about Beast Boy and Raven. I've always thought that they would be a good couple. I think you could make it better if you went into more detail and made the first three chapters as well as the remaining chapters a little longer with more depth. You might want to consider showing some of Raven's point of view. Good luck with the rest of the story!
|
