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Title: Ten
Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Incredible story...nicely done! I just discovered this story while reading Assassin's Hope. I like your writing so much I decided to check out your other stories. I have a new favorite author!
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Reviewed By: InuyahasChic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 06:04 CST
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the fic rocks.....hard.
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Reviewed By: inuchan89 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love the story it was really good
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Reviewed By: Tormented Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 19:46 CDT
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THAT CAN'T BE THE END! NO! IT CAN'T! WHY? You need to make at least one more chapter to tie it all up... well anyway that was pretty good. XOXO Tormented Hanyou
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Title: AWWWWWW!!
Reviewed By: 123Meme Go On: July 23, 2005 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is such a cute story so far. The ending is something that I can't wait for. Update soon!!! P.S. Love YA!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tormented Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 17:44 CDT
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I read one chapter so far and I think I love your story! Good work!
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 02:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what is it exactly that kag hasn't told inu. is she being transfered also? will they still "be okay?" what the hell is going on here? @_@ i'm lost. i know inu's going back to instruction, but that shouldn't be too much of a problem. right? what the heck does sess want with him now that rin has returned home safely? sorry 'bout all of the questions, but damn. i just gotta know! please update soon. great story and, as you would say, lotsa twists and turns. makes for a more interesting ride.
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Reviewed By: ayngel_babie On: March 31, 2005 18:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic. Period. You have some of the best writing skills!!pls update soon :o)!!
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an absolutely delicious fic! Yum! I just discovered it today, and read it straight through. Wow, who knew that Myouga would turn out to be one of the cover-ups? I liked that twist. And it sucks major ass that Inu is being sent back to Quantico, but I think Kagome has something up her sleeve... A note on spelling: You don't have many spelling mistakes, but just one thing that got me every time--it's throes of passion, not throws. There's three of those in the story (don't ask, I'm really anal about spelling), can't remember which chapters though. One was when Inu and Kag were looking at the photo on the apartment wall of them making love. Anywho, that's all. Happy writing! ~Xaenthe
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Reviewed By: Night_Miko (not logged in) On: March 29, 2005 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I'm impress that this story is turning out really great. Update as soon as you can because I want to know if they will be together again soon or will Naraku comes back.
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Title: post!
Reviewed By: Chako On: March 29, 2005 07:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first I thought it was another present Inuyasha fic, and so far I really enjoyed this story. But then, in the last chapter you wrote, it seems like it was connected to the Inugang from the past and that was pretty shocking and enjoyable. I really like this fic, but I noticed that you post rather slowly. I@would really like to finish reading this fic, but you post a ,little too slow for my liking. I might sound rude, but I really do enjoy this fic, and I just wanted you to post a little faster if it isn't too much trouble for you. I would understand if you were too busy, but keep posting!
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Reviewed By: black_talisman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 11:42 CST
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that's mean! you can't let it end there!! I am already waiting for the next chapter, and though i know that you don't have much free time, i am still impatient and just CANT wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: BrokenMortality [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fic was great. i was shocked by the ending and my heart goes out the couple who lost there baby...;( ((that was extremly evil...)) but a big highlight is the dowlfall of Naraku. **Cheers and pleading** please update (\ /) ( O.o) (>
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Reviewed By: NewReader On: January 14, 2005 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic. Period. You have some of the best writing skills! You left such an evil cliffhanger (!), but I know you'll update it soon and won't leave us hanging and wanting for more. Anyway, hope you post up another chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: jezzjamer2 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I story is really good. I was really sceptical at first but I'm impressed I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Title: cutie
Reviewed By: saint [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 17:10 CST
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Hhehehe can't wait for your update!!!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: January 12, 2005 19:55 CST
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=O great update =D
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Reviewed By: demonic_13 On: November 15, 2004 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please review im dieing here.......
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Reviewed By: demonic child_13 On: November 15, 2004 19:24 CST
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Reviewed By: pinayers On: October 25, 2004 20:39 CDT
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awww i really liked your story. too bad you stopped. ah oh well
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Title: where are you
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 15:56 CDT
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where are you you haven't updated in over a month i hope nothing bad has happend well just like to say that this is a great story and you should udate soon
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Reviewed By: peachykeen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 20:18 CDT
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pls update soon :o)
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Title: THAT WAS....
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS AMAZING! I've fallen in love with your story! PLEASE UPDATE! Oh and if you like A.U. Detective Stories with Inuyasha yuo can read mine! It's part one in the series: Love and Murder. It's called: Hidden Detail. Iloved your fic please update asap!!!^_~
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 21:30 CDT
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haha great two chapters =D
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! New Reader here! Your story is really good! I love the way how you portrayed Kagome and Sango as physically strong characters. It went very well with the story plot. I Hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: LadyNetiri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 13:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
...i...i loved it! ^^ Yay, Kagome! You tell 'im, girl! --Netiri
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: August 19, 2004 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was amazing. hahahaha. loved your comment at the end about that You'd do Kagome after that moment with Sess. lmao!!! Okay, I'd do her too! hahahaha. Okay, gain control of the giggles me! Alrighty-- all good, except for the ocassional giggle when I think about it. Those two chapters were amazing Thanks for writing them! hehehe. You're work is beautifully done and is breathtakingly flawless! Keep it up.. oh yea, almost forgot to throw in a traditional LOVES IT!! hehehe. Well I'm off for an extra long weekend starting now so if ya update between now and Sunday I'll be reading and reviewing after that! Keep up the phenominal job!! Later Gator--- Aitu
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Reviewed By: iowa chic On: August 18, 2004 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm love'n your story its GREAT and I really want to read more. BTW Thank you so much for updating so often and promising no week long waits. I hate it when authors take weeks and sometimes months to update.
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Reviewed By: peachykeen On: August 17, 2004 17:40 CDT
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i loved the last chapter you posted!! i cant wait to see what happens!! awesome work!!
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Title: Netiri
Reviewed By: LadyNetiri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 09:32 CDT
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^^ this is really great so far. i love the storyline, and NEED to know where its going! update soon! --Netiri
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