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| "Insomniac" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] | Title: OMG!!! SPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIKKKKKKKKEEEEEE!!!!!!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Spike's song! Of ALL the songs! Spikes! Hell yeah! *Is hit by Wanka Bars.* X.X *Gets back up.* So you're obsessed. It's chocolate, it's all good. *Reads one shot.* Ah, never seen it done this way before. Yeah, it fits this story well, good job for being unconventional again. Yes, still love the chapter, and think it's great that you used Spike's [from Buffy the Vampire Slayer/Angel universe] song. It's just perfect that the One Vampire that got to sing--and a rock anthem style song no less [well the char is a Brit]--is just perfect for Seto, the *emotionally* dead, but recovering, button-down billionaire. So far, the story is wonderful, the interactions are interesting, and I'm glad you're sticking to your guns about how this is all going to unfold. I'm also liking the potential multiple layers that I see. Yep, still going to have to keep poking you about this. Oh! Personal Note: It'll take me a week to beta things, not two, save for Mid-term and Finals weeks.
| Reviewed By: Tamlin, the lazy On: August 24, 2005 23:26 CDT
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I adored this chapter. The scenes with Jou playing slave were just hillarious. I just rolled on the floor. Leave it to Kaiba to think of something that evil. I like Marik as an off center loonie, who occasionally reverts back. I'm curious what you're going to do with Bakura though. I think that this is the first time I've seen a Bakura/Jou from ancient Egypt and you've got me all wondering and speculating now. What happened back then? Why did poor Jono kill himself? Will the past do a replay in the present? Questions, quesions... Also, what's up with Honda? He seems to have a few Kaiba issues... Great work, as always. All hail Goddess Velvetina. ps. I actually found this over on AFF and darted over here to read it. I still don't get notices about your story for some reason, but I'm still loyally addicted!
| Reviewed By: Tamlin who isn't logged on On: July 12, 2005 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhrg! Psycho yamis! Run away, run away! (lol) I love it. Sorry about being so tardy reviewing, for some reason MM doesn't tell me when you update and I have to go check periodically to see what's up with you. This was a great chapter. I really liked how you used the song. Update soon. I can't wait to see what you're going to do next!
| Title: ^o^
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(place logged me out!) On: July 03, 2005 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yep-yep! Ans I loves ya too! Loved the end of the chappie.
| Title: *Huggly-Love-Cuddle-Glomp-Love-Suggle-Glomp-Hug* Part 2!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 03:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! See, I wrote it one way already, but I'm going to rewrite it for the other story, so we get to see the event from a few different sides. A funny thing about that, a male friend looked the original version of it over . . . and said I had inadvertently killed Jou.~.~;; I didn't mean to make Seto THAT big. ~.~;; So I found a way for Jou to live (Go magic Lube! XD), but as fate had it, one of my fur friends pointed me towards a fur oriented site that had info on possible stats for dragon anatomy. So I can now fully rewrite it so Jou lives And it's not completely unbelievable that he does. XD (I don't know why I torture him so, I truly don't mean to, and yet it's become a habit in my stories. . . yeah I'm working on another unrelated Y/Y, with a S/J side, and I'm putting him through an emotional ringer in that one too. . . I really need to stop doing that to him.) Ah well, I've rambled long enough (and I had to post 2 reviews to do it! ^^;;) so I should just reiterate the "I'll always luv you, and I have way too much patience and stuff to occupy my time when I don't. XD" Much love always! P.S. e-mail me whenever for the lemon, the "Magic Lube" one is all written up and separated from all the other spoilers for that reality. I might need some time to deal with school thing and reread/spell check (forgive the American spelling) but otherwise it's done. And dedicated to you, and after you read it, you'll probably be able to see why that chp will be called "Silent Night". ^_^
| Title: *Huggly-Love-Cuddle-Glomp-Love-Suggle-Glomp-Hug*
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 03:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FWEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! Is all ok, I'll never stop lovin' ya. XD *waves hand dismissive-ly* Don't worry about the e-mail, I have a tendency to forget about my hotmail, and I know life can do that thing where it sucks for a long amount of time. You're not the only one who takes ages between updates now and again (hey, I'm only on chp 8 of that fic + prologue, and I've been working on it since Aug. 04). And look at how long it's taken me to respond to you! School work will do that to you. And you can never go wrong with Mokie being and evil little blighter/bugger/sod/etc. (Yay "brit-coms" for teaching me random bits of the language my English is a bastardization of. XD) It's most of Mokie's charm, and too few use it. Mwahahahaaa, all of my Cannon stories will have him as being too smart/evil for his own good. Mmmmm . . . Kaiba in "Silent Night" outfit . . . *drools* If you don't mind, I may steal that for some humor or AU fics, it just screams to be seen in public where people's jaws can drop. *Bows* I'm not worthy to have this outfit dedicated to me, and I am eternally touched by this gesture. And speaking of dedications, well I had always planed to do a companion S/J/S story to my Y/Y story, but one of the chapters will probably be named for your Christmas fic (and every one else can think it's the song. XD) *Gets hit with an epiphany* Of curse! The chp w/the S/J/S lemon! I can call it "Silent Night"! It will fit with my naming scheme And it works no matter who's P.O.V. it's in! | Reviewed By: moonstar_dust [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 12:08 CDT
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This story is awesome! I love it. Please update soon!
| Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: April 09, 2005 15:54 CDT
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I'm might tie you to a chair and force you to listen to "We are the Champions" until you update. I still can't figure out this manual for bringing people back to life for some reason they always end up evil with the name "Roger". Ever notice everybody who is brought back from the dead is named "Roger"? Good to see you're breaking the trend and Bringing back Marik! Is that what Bakura is doing? I can't wait to see how all the hidden plots turn out. Duke and Tristan, did Seto meet Tristan while he was with his stepfather Tristan got hurt or something? Are you going to bash Tristan? I want to know what happens but take your time I mcg't want some little trashy piece most authors do just to make people like me shut up. I guess annoying people never pays. Sigh. Thank You. DK;) P.S. Read anything of Dragondreamer Yami Dragon's stuff. One Way street is my favorite. As well as Chibi B channie's Tales of Crimson nights. It's finished on ff.net. Great authors. I may never live up to their and you greatness.
| Reviewed By: Tamlin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm finally catching up with all the ficies that I've missed lately, and I have REALY missed yours. Poor Seto, makes you happy that his adoptive father met a sidewalk so suddenly. All worship you. Keep up the great work.
| Title: Yay! You’re alive! *Huggle-Glomp*
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: November 04, 2004 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was worried something had happened to you, or that you didn't get my e-mail. Well the plan had been to send it to you via yahoo, but MM.org doesn't work the way I thought it did. However, I have it posted as a hidden story here at MM.org, but be aware that I have a tendency to update lots of chapters at once. What's up now isn't too different from what I have on my comp, but it's the little things that get you. Anyway it's at http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php/75198/ , well what I have up is there. Feel free to read it or whatever, or e-mail me at happydragon411@yahoo.com for future chapters. And thank you for dedicating the bonus short, *waterfall tears* even if I have to share it's still nice! And I love how this time they started to draw together a bit more. Whoot! Mokei was smart enough to drug Seto into sleeping! So few people have him do things like that. But the chap summery said something was happening inside someone's body? What did you mean by that? There were a few possibilities for what it could have been, but I honestly don't know what you meant. Oh well, until next chappy!
| Title: Mree .. =D
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 08:26 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, another awesome chapter. Jou and Seto were getting along so well, I would have sworn I'd see a lemon, or at least a kiss. But no, you're stingy and like to tease people! Lol.. Mokuba drugged Seto's drink again! And what's up with the crappy ass Yugi and Yami drama, no one like them! Damnit, oh and what was with that little Ryou and Bakura moment? As for Seto's 'memory'.. HORRIBLE. You cruel, miserable person! How could you do that to Seto??! Although, it does explain why he wouldn't want to talk about it and why he's so messed up. Oh yeah, and I'm lost as to why Jou couldn't feel the kiss and how come he only found out why when he was 14? You're confusing me! Naw, it's all good. Update the next chapter soon..!! (fweeeee! =P)
| Reviewed By: anubiset (to lazy to log in) [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 08:23 CST
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Hey, that is good. Hope that Jou can help him. I put you on my list so that I`ll know when you update. I love this story. Keep up the good work.
| Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Saelbu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 08:21 CST
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Wow, I'm so glad you updated, I hope ytou continue to soon, anyway great chapter and I can't wait to read more. Ja ne!
| Reviewed By: MrSbAnD [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooOOoooo yay another good SetoxJou fic for me.....*chibigrin* i really like this story and im lookin forward to where its going....btw the lemon wasnt bad at all. i liked it. and i hope you update soon cause i really wanna know what happens next!!!!
| Reviewed By: blue bura On: October 09, 2004 06:20 CDT
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WOW ^________^ cool story!! i love it!-oh and nice lemon ^_- cant wait for the up date ^^
| Title: FWEEEE!!
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll start off with saying sorry about what happened with you and your friend. I can't imagine what that would be like. If one of my friends pulled a stunt like that, I'd bitch-slap them back to whichever country they came from. Anyway, as for the story.. awesome! Everything is going great, there's NO rushing or anything. That's perfect. Thanks so much for the little delicious lemon at the end, I feel so special. Always happy to be of service.. and it's nice to get paid.. if you know what I mean, lol. Now if only that were to happen in the story.. heh heh heh. In due time, no? But enough rambling, I'm still very much enjoying reading and betaing this. I hope you and your friend can sort things out, and you can get back to writing. Update soon, so I can beta, and give the readers what they want!
| Title: Gomen
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looking back I've realized that I haven't really left you any real reviews. Yes I too am suffering the evils of too much schoolwork. You're in the U.K.? Cool, I'm East coast USA. *Reads note about friend* Oh gods, I'm sorry to hear that, you both have my prayers. As for the CDs, yep they're real and it's probably best to order them off line. As for Jou singing, that's mostly in the shorter fics or one-shots (except for long ones like mine ^__^) so it's not terribly overused in lengthy fics. And I think most people ignore The High Priest because 1) We still aren't clear yet on if Seto is a true reincarnation of him (meaning he won't show up as his Yami) 2) We don't know if he had the same or different personality as Seto. Now for your fic: I still love it. It's cute, and I like that you are NOT rushing things. Yes Seto was a bit OOC, but he was in pain, that and he knew it would take more energy then it was worth to let his pride get in the way. The lemon was good, but it could have been broken up into smaller paragraphs. Other then that, it was pretty solid for a first time. So keep going, I still like how this story is looking, and you'll be getting an e-mail from me with my first few chapters attached as apology for not giving you real reviews. Just be warned that my fic moves slow too. XD
| Reviewed By: Tamlin (who's not signed in) On: October 06, 2004 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't worry about rushing, take your time. Everyone always wants to know things and know things NOW! Just relax and do things at your own pace at your own time. It is your story after all, and as the resident goddess of your private world everything is yours to dictate. Your doing a great job being a goddess and I can't wait to see what your going to do next.
| Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 08:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, I got to hear some songs off of the different music CDs (or is there only one?) and they sound worth buying. Actually there might be "Character Songs" where different characters from the show sing, and that might explain all the fics where Jou can sing well. Ah uber . . such a useful word, it can be added to so many other words and is so expressive. Yes, I'm writing a fic and trying out Jou's accent too. So far it's readable, and I'm fighting to keep it that way. Personally I'd rather have Jou with no accent talking slang, then Jou with an accent and unreadable, so what you're doing is good. And before you ask, the puppy gets his dragon in my fic, actually he gets double teamed, the High Priest is there too. XD MMmmm . . .Alternate Universe goodness. ^.^
| Reviewed By: Tamlin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaggh! Jou you had to look in the deadly puppy eyes! Great chappie. I can so see Kaiba sweating in pain, but still being able to threaten Jou. You are really doing spectacular in charaterizations. Update soon!
| Title: Aroo
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo Hoo! It's Deme here to give a good review, as always. I'm wondering why I didn't get the automatic mail for this update though. Oh well. Anyway, I wanted more of the first paragraph, but NO..! You're mean and like to tease and tantalize people. Lol.. xD Glad to see you're not rushing anything, that's good. Can't wait until the next chapter.. I wanna know what happens! Other than that, I'm enjoying this so much so far. SetoxJou rocks! Well, I'm off to do my homework. *Does Hamster Dance on the way out* UPDATE SOON!!! =3
| Reviewed By: Leech On: September 08, 2004 18:45 CDT
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More...I want more!!!! Please!! It's very good!!!
| Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 09:56 CDT
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I hope you find the time to update soon. I`m really interested in where this story is going to go from here. I`ve so many where Kaiba rescues Jou but this is the first with Jou helping Kaiba. Update soon.
| Reviewed By: Tamlin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 00:20 CDT
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Yey! I just bumped into your fic. I love it! You know me I just love Kaiba/Jou fics and this is great! I really like how you have Kaiba and Jou. I can so see Jou leaping to the rescue and getting the snot beat out of him and then there's that whole ouchie thing with Kaiba's hand that was really kind of interesting. Anyway, I can't wait to see what you're going to do with them next. Update soon!
| Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 18:13 CDT
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Don't worry, there's always DVD. As for the cards, you can probably trade for them. Yes the song is just UBER Kaiba. And so far the fic is still looking good, so let's hear another cheer for being different. As for Jou's accent, every writer has a different idea of how thick it should be. So far it's good, just keep using as much slag as you can for him, have him swallow a few consonants, slur a few syllables, the usual Jou stuff. But it's really fine the way it is, because I've seen people do so much with it that it becomes almost unreadable.
| Title: Aroo!?
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY.. I get a shout out and a dedication. Two in one, I feel special. =3 .. I can't stand math, especially algebra. I failed all my tests in that class, but still passed with a B O__o. Probably 'cause I always did my homework. Anyway, you may already know this, but I was a bit surprised when Seto got beaten up like that. Then remembering he was in a depression-like state, it became clear that he wouldn't have been able to defend himself. The fact that depressed people sometimes like getting hurt, and that his hand was totaled, didn't cross my mind... oops XD Anyway, hurry up and update you lazy baka.. ! (No hurry o_O) I wonder how Seto is gonna react to Jou being so close to him like that when he wakes up. Oh and I normally don't rate Spelling & Grammer, I'm just doing that to give props to myself.. XD ¬¬'
| Reviewed By: XxXToraXxX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dont forget to continue writing and i'll be your beta reader if u want juss contact me at insanexxxpyro@netscape.net or if u have AIM juss IM me on tht! ^_^
| Title: mreeeeee!!
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.. this is the first SetoxJou fic I've ever read in which they were the main pairing. So, it better be a good one! Lol.. I'm liking it so far, very curious as to what will happen. Stupid Anzu.. I was a bit surprised when Ryou said that remark, are you sure Ryou was the one that said it, or Bakura, muhahahhaa. Anyway.. about the beta.. I've been told that they read a fic before it's released and correct any mistakes. But I'm not sure.. if that's what happens, I think I'd make a good one. Or maybe this is a just a rash decision at someone saying that they actually need a beta. But seriosuly, if proofreading is what it's all about, I wouldn't mind.. I'm excellent in grammer. Anyone, correct me if I'm wrong. Update soon ^^
| Reviewed By: HappyDragon(not logged in) On: August 16, 2004 02:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Don't know if you've watched the movie yet or not, but "You're not me" really IS a song about Kaiba. But that's neither here nor there, what's important is that I will now be reading this fic. And it's good to be different, going against the grain can be fun!
| Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 08:07 CDT
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This looks like it might be interesting. Looking forward to an update.
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