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| "Insomniac" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 > » ] | Title: FWEEEE!!
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll start off with saying sorry about what happened with you and your friend. I can't imagine what that would be like. If one of my friends pulled a stunt like that, I'd bitch-slap them back to whichever country they came from. Anyway, as for the story.. awesome! Everything is going great, there's NO rushing or anything. That's perfect. Thanks so much for the little delicious lemon at the end, I feel so special. Always happy to be of service.. and it's nice to get paid.. if you know what I mean, lol. Now if only that were to happen in the story.. heh heh heh. In due time, no? But enough rambling, I'm still very much enjoying reading and betaing this. I hope you and your friend can sort things out, and you can get back to writing. Update soon, so I can beta, and give the readers what they want!
| Title: Gomen
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looking back I've realized that I haven't really left you any real reviews. Yes I too am suffering the evils of too much schoolwork. You're in the U.K.? Cool, I'm East coast USA. *Reads note about friend* Oh gods, I'm sorry to hear that, you both have my prayers. As for the CDs, yep they're real and it's probably best to order them off line. As for Jou singing, that's mostly in the shorter fics or one-shots (except for long ones like mine ^__^) so it's not terribly overused in lengthy fics. And I think most people ignore The High Priest because 1) We still aren't clear yet on if Seto is a true reincarnation of him (meaning he won't show up as his Yami) 2) We don't know if he had the same or different personality as Seto. Now for your fic: I still love it. It's cute, and I like that you are NOT rushing things. Yes Seto was a bit OOC, but he was in pain, that and he knew it would take more energy then it was worth to let his pride get in the way. The lemon was good, but it could have been broken up into smaller paragraphs. Other then that, it was pretty solid for a first time. So keep going, I still like how this story is looking, and you'll be getting an e-mail from me with my first few chapters attached as apology for not giving you real reviews. Just be warned that my fic moves slow too. XD
| Reviewed By: Tamlin (who's not signed in) On: October 06, 2004 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't worry about rushing, take your time. Everyone always wants to know things and know things NOW! Just relax and do things at your own pace at your own time. It is your story after all, and as the resident goddess of your private world everything is yours to dictate. Your doing a great job being a goddess and I can't wait to see what your going to do next.
| Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 08:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, I got to hear some songs off of the different music CDs (or is there only one?) and they sound worth buying. Actually there might be "Character Songs" where different characters from the show sing, and that might explain all the fics where Jou can sing well. Ah uber . . such a useful word, it can be added to so many other words and is so expressive. Yes, I'm writing a fic and trying out Jou's accent too. So far it's readable, and I'm fighting to keep it that way. Personally I'd rather have Jou with no accent talking slang, then Jou with an accent and unreadable, so what you're doing is good. And before you ask, the puppy gets his dragon in my fic, actually he gets double teamed, the High Priest is there too. XD MMmmm . . .Alternate Universe goodness. ^.^
| Reviewed By: Tamlin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaggh! Jou you had to look in the deadly puppy eyes! Great chappie. I can so see Kaiba sweating in pain, but still being able to threaten Jou. You are really doing spectacular in charaterizations. Update soon!
| Title: Aroo
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo Hoo! It's Deme here to give a good review, as always. I'm wondering why I didn't get the automatic mail for this update though. Oh well. Anyway, I wanted more of the first paragraph, but NO..! You're mean and like to tease and tantalize people. Lol.. xD Glad to see you're not rushing anything, that's good. Can't wait until the next chapter.. I wanna know what happens! Other than that, I'm enjoying this so much so far. SetoxJou rocks! Well, I'm off to do my homework. *Does Hamster Dance on the way out* UPDATE SOON!!! =3
| Reviewed By: Leech On: September 08, 2004 18:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
More...I want more!!!! Please!! It's very good!!!
| Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 09:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hope you find the time to update soon. I`m really interested in where this story is going to go from here. I`ve so many where Kaiba rescues Jou but this is the first with Jou helping Kaiba. Update soon.
| Reviewed By: Tamlin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 00:20 CDT
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Yey! I just bumped into your fic. I love it! You know me I just love Kaiba/Jou fics and this is great! I really like how you have Kaiba and Jou. I can so see Jou leaping to the rescue and getting the snot beat out of him and then there's that whole ouchie thing with Kaiba's hand that was really kind of interesting. Anyway, I can't wait to see what you're going to do with them next. Update soon!
| Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 18:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Don't worry, there's always DVD. As for the cards, you can probably trade for them. Yes the song is just UBER Kaiba. And so far the fic is still looking good, so let's hear another cheer for being different. As for Jou's accent, every writer has a different idea of how thick it should be. So far it's good, just keep using as much slag as you can for him, have him swallow a few consonants, slur a few syllables, the usual Jou stuff. But it's really fine the way it is, because I've seen people do so much with it that it becomes almost unreadable.
| Title: Aroo!?
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY.. I get a shout out and a dedication. Two in one, I feel special. =3 .. I can't stand math, especially algebra. I failed all my tests in that class, but still passed with a B O__o. Probably 'cause I always did my homework. Anyway, you may already know this, but I was a bit surprised when Seto got beaten up like that. Then remembering he was in a depression-like state, it became clear that he wouldn't have been able to defend himself. The fact that depressed people sometimes like getting hurt, and that his hand was totaled, didn't cross my mind... oops XD Anyway, hurry up and update you lazy baka.. ! (No hurry o_O) I wonder how Seto is gonna react to Jou being so close to him like that when he wakes up. Oh and I normally don't rate Spelling & Grammer, I'm just doing that to give props to myself.. XD ¬¬'
| Reviewed By: XxXToraXxX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dont forget to continue writing and i'll be your beta reader if u want juss contact me at insanexxxpyro@netscape.net or if u have AIM juss IM me on tht! ^_^
| Title: mreeeeee!!
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.. this is the first SetoxJou fic I've ever read in which they were the main pairing. So, it better be a good one! Lol.. I'm liking it so far, very curious as to what will happen. Stupid Anzu.. I was a bit surprised when Ryou said that remark, are you sure Ryou was the one that said it, or Bakura, muhahahhaa. Anyway.. about the beta.. I've been told that they read a fic before it's released and correct any mistakes. But I'm not sure.. if that's what happens, I think I'd make a good one. Or maybe this is a just a rash decision at someone saying that they actually need a beta. But seriosuly, if proofreading is what it's all about, I wouldn't mind.. I'm excellent in grammer. Anyone, correct me if I'm wrong. Update soon ^^
| Reviewed By: HappyDragon(not logged in) On: August 16, 2004 02:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Don't know if you've watched the movie yet or not, but "You're not me" really IS a song about Kaiba. But that's neither here nor there, what's important is that I will now be reading this fic. And it's good to be different, going against the grain can be fun!
| Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 08:07 CDT
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This looks like it might be interesting. Looking forward to an update.
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