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| "The Asbal Crystal" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Title: Omg! plz continue!
Reviewed By: The Midnight Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz continue!! Ur stories are awesome, the best hamtaro fanfic I've ever read! They r so good, so plz continue soon! Look at all these ppls, they want to read more!! :D I know I've emailed u a dozen times asking this but write more soon plz!!!
| Reviewed By: Alice Chan On: June 06, 2005 00:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please, please, PLEASe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Finish up your story!!!!!!!!!!! Your stories are soooooooo powerful!!!! If you stop now, then, I wont have any sleep ever again!!!!! I want to know if Sandy, my fav. ham, will be brought back to life! I have one question to ask you: Why did you use my name as one of the Dark Circle Members? It's really funny seeing my name, I feel very evil. I keep on saying to myself, that I shouldn't do these horrible things. Please make Alice, in the story, back to her regular self! And make the ham-hams defeat the ???? guy. Send your entire story to me, please. alicechan_1010@hotmail.com! Please finish your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: Erase It Please!
Reviewed By: Stanlover On: March 24, 2005 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue! Also, copuld you erase that chapter named ''No Chapter" PLEASE?! And why did you quit?! I love your stories!!! PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS CONTINUE!!!!! I wannna know whether Sandy will come back to life, brainwashed or normal, by Stan and Maxwell or the Dark Circle? And I may be crazy but I think Stings was alive and wanted to have revenge on the Ham-Hams so he initiated the Dark Circle and started to brainwash other Hamsters to have revenge. In other words, I THINK Stings IS the master!!! Well, just continue to see what the hell will happen later. PLS CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Could you also make Sandy brainwashed and then the Ham-Hams were hamnappped, put in jail and the master wanted to brainwash them all over again? Also, make Stan get tortured by weapons and elements and...make him discover...elemental powers! It's just because that's my idea for my fics later on... And then Stan is the ONLY one who could get Sandy back to normal? Kill Stan as well to get Sandy normal like this one! And then make a fic that Stan comes back to life AFTER those Hams who aren't brainwashed get brainwashed and THEN Stan comes back to life. Could you also get Stan to reappear in one of those fics? I just want you to do that, OK?! PLEASE?! PLEASE?!
| Title: it's me, Jonouchi
Reviewed By: the legendary guardian blade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 14:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, SoOt, did you even read his fics? anyway, keep it up YH
| Title: YOU SUCK INCREDIBLY
Reviewed By: Songs of Old Times [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 15:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU SUCK SO BAD YOU SHOULD DIE!!! STOP WRITING YOU RETARD, YOU'RE MAKING ME WANT TO GOUGE OUT MY EYES AND ROAST THEM OVER AN OPEN FLAME!!! Yours peacefully, Bill Clinton :)
| Title: Note
Reviewed By: Yami Hamtaro (What's my password again?) On: October 21, 2004 17:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Just let you know that i will start up my fics again. i just lost my password. -_-
| Title: Best part of the series
Reviewed By: Big Bad Bongo 2001 On: August 13, 2004 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Usually, all Dark Circle stories are great, but this....THIS WAS JUST GREAT!!! Unlike originality in stories, this is the one I think is the best idea for a series ever!! I don't like Hamtaro, nor any of the Hamtaro fanfics I was told to review, but after being introduced into this series, I'm willing to make an exception. Let me explain this whole thing: There's this group called the dark circle, who attack these ham hams to join their group. Leading this group is an unknown leader who runs everything the servants do to the Ham-Hams (Or that group of hamsters that are the main characters), this fight has been battling this fight for over 13 parts, each one focusing on different hamsters. This is a good idea, because the biggest problem alot of people make is not focuing on all the characters in the story. Yami Hamtaro, the author of the dark circle series, avoids this problem. This means the writer knows the story has to allow all the characters to have some of the spotlight. Everything else in this story is great. Like I said, the Orignality and Creativity are the best I've seen in al long time. The spelling and grammer, the style of the writing (Script style), and The Enjoyment of the story is near to perfectionision (Is that right?). This deserves an overal rating of 10 out of ten. This could defeat all the stories in the Big Ass Fanfiction contest 3. I might not want this to end. But at some point, It will, so go Yami! Go write the best you can write.
| Title: WOOHHOO!!!!
Reviewed By: Gothic-Sabrina On: August 13, 2004 07:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYA!!!! ^_^ *claps like mad* c'mon people! This is a good one! eh? ^^ yeah! Mesa loves it and u, I mean LOVES DA FIC!!!
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