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| "The Green-clothed Warrior" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 18:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! you update pretty quick... I don't have anything to say, bye!
| Title: poor Navi
Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 20:06 CDT
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No Navi?! At least she was better than Saria. Saria: **on ocarina** Why are you calling me link? There is nothing I can do! **ocarina call ends** Uhh... How long has this story been up? If it hasn't been that long, then I can understand one review (now two). If not... oh well. In that last chapter, what was with the underlining? You just sort of underlined random parts and didn't do any quotation marks. It was very confusing. NEway... The sooner you update, the sooner I come back!
| Reviewed By: kuramafan58 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! ^_^ I loved the story. Which game was that? They all get jumbled together after a while. Link is so hot, isn't he? This is the first Legend of Zelda/ Inu Yasha fanfic I've read, and it's great! Keep up the good work!
| Title: Author's Thoughts
Reviewed By: Patriot1776 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 09:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
A fanfic's harshest critic is always it's own author. And yes, there are flaws I find in my story. My writing style I think could be better, but that is something that is I think going to be impossibly hard to change. I could've put Navi in to provide more comic relief, but I'm like most of the other players who've played Ocarina of Time and absolutely HATE HER and believe it was a mistake for Nintendo to put her in. Other than that, I've done real well with this story so far, as I myself enjoy going back and re-reading what I've already written. I believe if the author themself enjoys going back and rereading what they've written, they've succeeded in making the story fun to read.
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