| "Her Smile" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: wow
Reviewed By: sakurahime [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2010 13:51 CST
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this is an AMAZING work. it made me cry.
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... that was good... but sad... too bad it had to end like that... what a tear jerker!!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beatiful. This is a wonderful poem you came up with. Its sad but thats what make it even better. Hits a person straight to the heart don't you think?
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Reviewed By: -saiyin- [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 10:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. I don't usually like poems like this but...After reading your story "I'll remember you forever" this doesn't quite make to it but...still sad :( Romantic. I did really like ti your timing seemd fine to me. I dunno how you could rhyme so much...mind you I suck at poetry hehe!
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Reviewed By: trackstr88 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 02:17 CDT
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wow this was an amazing poem. I have tried the past year to write poetry, not my cup o tea! u are definately talented please keep writing more!! a new fan! trackstr88
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Reviewed By: Neeako [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*i have tears running down my cheeks* that is beautifley written. i am still crying over it! (10 minutes after i actuly read it...my computer crashed)
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Reviewed By: Fire elemental1212 On: September 19, 2005 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you all 10's because you did a great job with this. I'va also read all your other fan fics and I must say, you are really quite the talented writer. Another thing is, this is a great poem and I was wondering if I could put it up on my xanga website. Um, I'm not exactly sure how I'll get your answer so I'll just give you my email adress, so please give me your answer. My email is, andy1212@sbcglobal.net
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Reviewed By: Kagome-chan2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I cried!!!I havent cried for a long time!!!
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Reviewed By: Inu_KagomeFan On: November 13, 2004 16:43 CST
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That was so sad and sweet! I luved it!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Hanyougal [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I cried! I was wondering if I could change the words for a song I am recording I am going to a studio to see if I can make it big time! If so then I can give you some money dude! Ilove it and it's okay if you say no. Cause I might not make it anyway *pouts* Hmmph oh well! See ya!
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Reviewed By: tsuki_no_oni [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 19:35 CDT
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*sobs* that was beautiful. and...well, poetic. lovely job.
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Saki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 10:19 CDT
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;_; Noo... Inuyasha died... well, Kagome did too... but. But... *sigh* Oh well. I guess that in the anime, it would be more likely that Inuyasha would die than Kagome. However, I doubt either of them dies. o_O;; Uh...? Hm. This was a very sad, hauntily beautiful poem. *Siiiigh* I just can't write poetry...
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Reviewed By: SOS_Amy911 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 17:50 CDT
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OMG!!!!You ar eso good you made me cry and not even the passion of Christ made me cry!(well almost!)
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Reviewed By: inuyashapup [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 16:55 CDT
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:( i am still crying that was so sad!!!!!! update *contines crying*
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Reviewed By: oashisunoyume [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 23:04 CDT
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wow...really good poem! hope you write a story
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