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| "Nightmare's Memories" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 16:34 CST
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Rather sad ending though, don't you think. At least they are free now.
| Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 16:21 CST
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so sweet of her! And him, as well. Though he probably is in complete self-denial now.
| Title: ...wow...
Reviewed By: Kumoritora [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I just have to say.....daaannnggg... this story made me discusted (IN A GOOD WAY), sad, happy, and mad. lol good job. Made me feel like i had pms all over again. (having just got over it XD) The repeating added emotions to the story, tho to tell the truth i skipped over some of it eheh.. but this is one of the most unique stories i have read yet. Also one of the most gorey... gorry..gory..nvm.. stories I have read. Very very good. expect me to check out your other stories!
| Reviewed By: Garret Jax [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 10:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I figure that since I finally joined up with MediaMiner, I should review this fic, since I've never even read it before. Now, I'm sure you already know some of the stuff I'm about to say, cause this is an old fic but I'm going to say it anyway, cause you can never have too much constructive critisism. First off, I'm goign to say that this was wonderful. The writing was artfully crafted, and it grabbed me and drew me in, forcing me to read it all in one sitting. The descriptions were so very vivid that I actually had a nightmare last night (A kind of silly one, but you know...) Now, because you do things so very well, I'm going to get very critical here, because you have the talent to get even better. Now, when doing horror, one of your reviewers were right, in that horror is more than gore. Now, you DID have a lot more there than gore. You had lots of suspense, and good development of characters. you had everything you needed, in there, but for a reader of more sensetive constitution (me), I would almost say that it was too much. Maybe, if you try doing a horror story again, try toning down on the gore just a bit, and keeping all the other stuff. Another thing was the dialouge. It seems to get just a little scripted when it gets real emotional. This seems better in your later fics, though, and its not that noticable. Just thought I'd point it out. Anywhat, I've only got 90 characters left, so I gotta log off. BUt thanks for writing this. I really enjoyed it.
| Reviewed By: Kawaii Saki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 10:13 CDT
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Okay, since my mind tends to create very detailed, vivid images, and all my senses just react to that as well -- I feel like hurling... But other than the gore (which is good gore, except for my little problem), this was a great story. Very fitting for the dark side of me. At first, I didn't believe (or, didn't want to believe) that Sango, Miroku, Onigumo and Shippo died... and I really, really, REALLY didn't believe it when Inuyasha died... let's just say this differs from your usual writing style and genre. To an extreme. But, nevertheless, I enjoyed it... this is going on my favourites... I suppose I just don't really like reading horror -- I prefer angst, actually. Either way, you're a great author. Hm. Since I also want to take up all 1500 characters provided for the review, I think I'll continue... Well, I could come up with some things that would add more effect to the gore... example: As Inuyasha pulled out the human's heart, a loud, deep, squelch sounded. He smirked evilly as he felt the flesh pull at his hand as he yanked. Oh god, that's... *chewed up breakfast and bile comes up to throat* Ugh... I don't I should read gore that often. Well... detailed gore, anyway. But, since pretty much everything you write is pretty detailed, I don't think that'll be happening anytime soon... is it just me, or do stories get a lot more reviews when posted on ff.net than on mm.org? o_O;; It's probably just me. Hmm... not many characters left to go! ^_^; I'm insane.
| Reviewed By: nauriell [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is SO FUCKING GOOD!!!!!!!!!! I just love it. It's all, absolutely incredibly one of the best fanfictions that I've ever read. I just want to scream how much I LOVE this story. Okay, I'll shut up now...don't want to make your head inflate too much.....*squeal* I love this story. (by the way, that does include writing style, literary devices, etc.)
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