Title: inu4life
Reviewed By: inu4life [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 11:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
okay... so i only have one major complaint about this fanfic... sango and miroku are sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooc!!! miroku, not so much, but sango... and one more thing... what's up with all of the code at the bottom of the page??? it was a really good fic, just maybe next time make it so it isnt so out of character... like starting with miroku groping her, and her slapping him and stalking off angry, with him following her and trying to explain that he does it because he loves her, and THEN get to the 'other' stuff. ttfn!
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