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| "Elemental" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: tsuki an'ei On: October 29, 2004 18:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
keep on writing cuz this is a really good story!~
| Title: wow! i like! *chappies 1-12*
Reviewed By: DG32173 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story! please continue! will you read my story? it's a youko/oc pairing in the prologue, then a kurama/same oc in the rest of the chapters! well, ja ne!
| Reviewed By: MoonFoxChild [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 23:45 CDT
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I read your first couple of chapters and am still reading. Very Cool! I would never have thought of something like that, the stroy is original and creative. I hope you keep writing this fic, its very well done. Hurray ^_^
| Reviewed By: Dionysus [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 19:12 CDT
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I just read your first two chapters....They are, uh...interesting. You can actually spell and use grammar! Yay! I don't know what to say for the plot, though, it's too early on and a bit confusing. Did Yusuke kill Genkai and Keiko? You didn't elaborate, so it seemed so "Oh, I forgot to mention, they're dead," in an offhand sort of way. You have a lovely style of writing, very interesting, but you may want to clear up some of the things you mention. It get confusing sometimes.(then again, I'm easily confused...) Um...but I really do like your fanfic thus far. Add some more chapters, you're a great writer!
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