"Doing Something Stupid" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Resse [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 22:21 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: THIS IS A GREAT STORY. I CANT WAIT FOR THE UPDAT.HOLLA!
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Title: Reviewness! Reviewed By: Selphie Branford [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 20:20 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Very good. I don't know if I'll be able to read more(considering I'm writing my own fanfiction). I like the original characters and the idea for Iruka having a former wife is totally original I give you a four and a half star rating on it. Big surprise for her return. Only read to chapter two. Maaay read more later.
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Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 16:28 CDT Comment/Review: ok, make the baby someone elses besides Iruka but like he's dead or something and she was looking for some support/sympathy . Good writing though I'm not sure an old friend of Iruka's would have spilled so many beans on him. cdk
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