"Videl and Gohan's Little Problem" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: SORCERESSFUJIN On: November 19, 2004 20:58 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Great story!!!! Reviewed By: jersey On: September 07, 2004 13:35 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Your story is really great but i think you should make your chapters a little bit longer. And perhaps updated a little faster if you can . But other than your story is great . I'm really exited too see Bulma's plan!!! continue like that!!!
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Reviewed By: monchi On: August 29, 2004 02:43 CDT Comment/Review: I know I read this story from somewhere... Fanfiction maybe???
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Title: Sorry Reviewed By: Hot Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 01:44 CDT Comment/Review: Um I reviewed the wrong story but i like it
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Title: I want more Reviewed By: Hot Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 01:42 CDT Comment/Review: You got that right and I want more god dammit and those long chapters you mentioned post em please.
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