| "Videl and Gohan's Little Problem" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: -hakaku123- [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2010 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this was SOOOO good you have to keep going and make another chapter PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE make another chapter and it was soo good i could not stop reading it i almost fell back in my chair it was so funny i mean with the phone sex thing i'm still laughing at it
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Reviewed By: Eden's Nymph [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 14:08 CST
Comment/Review:
You are awesome! Keep it up, Erika! Much love, Eden's Nymph
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Reviewed By: dark inferno [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 07:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Keep writing gohan/videl storys because there just isn't enogth of them. rated x of course
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Reviewed By: Ozzy4Prez666 On: July 05, 2005 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. It's so funny how Videl and Gohan keep getting interrupted by everyone, and the phone sex part was hysterical. I died.
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Reviewed By: Transfixed On: July 04, 2005 08:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! Wow Wow Wow Wow!! I have been searching for a decent Gohan/Videl GT fic for ages and thank whatever deity for you!!! This story is great! Can't wait for the next chapter (Hopefully there will be one?!?!?!)
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Reviewed By: Amy (Graysidewalk@gmail.com) On: June 11, 2005 00:56 CDT
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I like this story very much. You portray the relationship of Gohan and Videl with realism, which I greatly appreciate :). You writing skills are also very good, you can spell, write a coherent sentence, have plot development, and keep everyone IC (my biggest pet peeve), which again, I appreciate. Anyhoo, my point is that you're doing great with this fic and I get really happy when I realize it's been updated :) Keep up the great writing! P.S I'm glad to see Videl FINALLY got some. I practically cheered for her ;)
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Reviewed By: twistedpyro123 On: May 13, 2005 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
no! you MUST continue!! what happens next?! I MUST KNOWWWWW
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Title: Nice chappy...
Reviewed By: morgansgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 13:23 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you finally updated this fic. I really like how they keep coming so close to being together and then get interruped! You're doing a great job and please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: ShyAngel91 On: March 08, 2005 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fabulas it was soo good update before i but a curse on u ha ha ha ha ha P.s this is the best gohan videl story i have read(enjoyment factor 100 phone sex lol)
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Title: "Videl and Gohan's Little Problem
Reviewed By: DMC On: December 11, 2004 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE
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Title: "Videl and Gohan's Little Problem
Reviewed By: DMC On: December 11, 2004 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE
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Title: "Videl and Gohan's Little Problem
Reviewed By: DMC On: December 11, 2004 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE
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Title: "Videl and Gohan's Little Problem
Reviewed By: DMC On: December 11, 2004 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't remember what I wrote at ff. update
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Title: Oh thank you!!
Reviewed By: morgansgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 17:46 CST
Comment/Review:
I have been waiting for such a long time for an update!! I can't believe how close Videl was but I still wonder what Gohan's problem is? I wonder what's going through his mind when he's with her and why he acts the way he does. Anyway, thanks again for updating and I'll look for more soon.
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Title: Please!!!
Reviewed By: morgansgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 15:44 CST
Comment/Review:
You have GOT to continue on with this story. It's so original and well written. Please update soon, even if it's just one chapter. Give your loyal fans something!! Pretty, pretty please :(
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