| "Videl and Gohan's Little Problem" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Amy (Graysidewalk@gmail.com) On: June 11, 2005 00:56 CDT
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I like this story very much. You portray the relationship of Gohan and Videl with realism, which I greatly appreciate :). You writing skills are also very good, you can spell, write a coherent sentence, have plot development, and keep everyone IC (my biggest pet peeve), which again, I appreciate. Anyhoo, my point is that you're doing great with this fic and I get really happy when I realize it's been updated :) Keep up the great writing! P.S I'm glad to see Videl FINALLY got some. I practically cheered for her ;)
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Reviewed By: twistedpyro123 On: May 13, 2005 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
no! you MUST continue!! what happens next?! I MUST KNOWWWWW
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Title: Nice chappy...
Reviewed By: morgansgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 13:23 CST
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I'm so glad you finally updated this fic. I really like how they keep coming so close to being together and then get interruped! You're doing a great job and please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: ShyAngel91 On: March 08, 2005 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fabulas it was soo good update before i but a curse on u ha ha ha ha ha P.s this is the best gohan videl story i have read(enjoyment factor 100 phone sex lol)
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Title: "Videl and Gohan's Little Problem
Reviewed By: DMC On: December 11, 2004 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE
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Title: "Videl and Gohan's Little Problem
Reviewed By: DMC On: December 11, 2004 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE
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Title: "Videl and Gohan's Little Problem
Reviewed By: DMC On: December 11, 2004 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE
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Title: "Videl and Gohan's Little Problem
Reviewed By: DMC On: December 11, 2004 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't remember what I wrote at ff. update
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Title: Oh thank you!!
Reviewed By: morgansgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 17:46 CST
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I have been waiting for such a long time for an update!! I can't believe how close Videl was but I still wonder what Gohan's problem is? I wonder what's going through his mind when he's with her and why he acts the way he does. Anyway, thanks again for updating and I'll look for more soon.
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Title: Please!!!
Reviewed By: morgansgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 15:44 CST
Comment/Review:
You have GOT to continue on with this story. It's so original and well written. Please update soon, even if it's just one chapter. Give your loyal fans something!! Pretty, pretty please :(
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Reviewed By: SORCERESSFUJIN On: November 19, 2004 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Great story!!!!
Reviewed By: jersey On: September 07, 2004 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is really great but i think you should make your chapters a little bit longer. And perhaps updated a little faster if you can . But other than your story is great . I'm really exited too see Bulma's plan!!! continue like that!!!
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Reviewed By: monchi On: August 29, 2004 02:43 CDT
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I know I read this story from somewhere... Fanfiction maybe???
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Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: Hot Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 01:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Um I reviewed the wrong story but i like it
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Title: I want more
Reviewed By: Hot Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 01:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
You got that right and I want more god dammit and those long chapters you mentioned post em please.
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