| "White Shadows" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Elithea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Erm...the ending doesn't speak much to me but I still like your work.
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Reviewed By: Elithea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sorry! I am not familliar with this site. I really think your writing style great.
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Reviewed By: Elithea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your work. It makes me think, a lot. Your style makes everything more interesting.
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: October 11, 2004 15:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm not logged in... :( Well, your story is very interesting, but this last chapter... I'm really confused. Who's talking? I know you keep switching from the two of them (or at least, I think you are), but I can't tell which is which most of the time. Other than that, this story is very interesting and I can't wait for you to continue.
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Title: Ugh..
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 18:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
It might be my hunger.. but I'm confused. Confused like nothing.. I can't tell who is narrating, or talking at the moment. Do you keep switching? Hmm, no yaoi.. bummer.
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Title: fweeeee
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't read a good story in a while, all my authors aren't updating. I like this story though, awesome grammer (that's hard to find). The plot is interesting, but a bit confusing, not that I'm confused. I've never read a fic in which Ryou was like this, umm.. mean. And he made Bakura cry so easily. I wasn't expecting him to actually kill Ryou either. But there are the funny moments. Anyway, nice job.. update soon.
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Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! this is sooooo good! its really cool and dark! anyway, update soon!!!
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