| "Summer Love" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: wooo!
Reviewed By: miaa_hiaa [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 19:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
GO YOU! *smiles*
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Title: Chris The Anime Guy
Reviewed By: Chris The Anime Guy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A good start to a good story^^ Sakaki and Kagura are my 2 fave characters and its a refreshign change to see a straight Azumanga Daioh fic :D Please continue! ^________^
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Reviewed By: Kimmie-chan On: December 07, 2004 05:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm i cant really imagine the azu-girls in romance, but the way you wrote chp 1 is very convinvcing, plz update soon!
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Title: Prologue(ish) review
Reviewed By: Mailer Daemon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 17:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm, it has an interesting start. For the most part, the spelling is really good. Remember, since your original characters are supposedly going to play a big part in the story, be sure to give them a lot of characterization. Be a little more descriptive. And, be sure to give equal time to the other girls. (I like Yomi! ^^)-----Other than that, keep writing, and we'll see how it'll turn out.
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