| "Forbidden Fantasies" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Fantastic
Reviewed By: Kerrie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fantastic, extraordianry fanfic which I personally enjoyed. Can you imagine Naraku coming out of the present box like that? Anyways, nothing is wrong with your fanfictions aside from a few grammer mistakes (nobody's perfect! xD) and I'll be back soon *laughs in a sinister way but starts coughing* In a good way. xD
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Reviewed By: happypug4191 On: October 08, 2004 14:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
i've never read a sango and naraku fic but i really love ur's. very very good!
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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i never thought of naraku and sango but these stories are great. i like how each was a different time and situation. shame how they are really enemies but thats what we have fics for. keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Talk about a totally zesty fic! I love it. Had me hanging off the edge of my seat!!! Great writing abilities!
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Reviewed By: Tiger_gurl On: September 19, 2004 01:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
damn naraku a teacher never saw that one.
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Reviewed By: catogirl2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really getting good now ;) (I shouldn't b reading things like this it gives me bad ideas =3) lol oh well! Continue as soon as possible
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Reviewed By: SweetCandyCanes On: August 26, 2004 22:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hot lemons. ;) keep going
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Reviewed By: catogirl2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 16:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
this chapter was kind of confusing, because I thought Naraku and Sango already knew each other, but any way good either way.
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Title: A story not like any other I have read before
Reviewed By: Sailor_Linnea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 08:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the first Naraku/Sango fic I have read. It was a different kind of fan-fic, in a good way. I would love a sequel to this story to see what their hopeless love will lead them.
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