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Reviewed By: asdfghjkll On: September 18, 2005 16:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey i just started reading..and i hate to be so mean right off! but you keep using the word "sprite" i think you mean spirit right???... it's just a little distracting :)
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Reviewed By: DarkAngel69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great story!!!!! i hope to read the sequeal!! hehehehe ^_^ Your story rocks!!!!! ^_^ hehehehe
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Reviewed By: aoshi'sgurl On: August 16, 2004 18:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
good lord! that was AWESOME! hey... maybe you could like... do some san/miro next time... ya know... they mignt be worse then kag/inu when it comes to shying away, and i couldnt POSSIBLY c why... HACK HACK, COUGH COUGH, MIROKU..., HACK HACK. hahaha
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Title: hiiiiiiii
Reviewed By: skalait On: August 16, 2004 08:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
hay your on fanfiction.net i read your story it is good cool
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