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"The Actions Speak Louder Than Words Series" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Title: MeLaiya
Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 23, 2004 00:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this, are you gonna update soon? Cant wait for the next chapter.
 Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 22, 2004 11:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really really like the simple declarative sentence strucure and the almost blunt way of "speaking" you have for Trowa's POV. It suits him, and Heero, perfectly. He is laconic and to the point, and yet his words in the story have many layers of meaning. I liked the focus on the physical, something I think both boys would more readily understand. On top of all this, there is a sense of wistful sweetness about them that makes me long for a happy ending for the boys.

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