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Reviewed By: Fayemegan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 13:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! really good so far! great plot, I dont know whats up with Miroku's dream though! Can't wait to see what else happens!!!
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Title: About the Names
Reviewed By: PawnShoppeLove [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 17:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
I know they're not very good, but how bout Miyako for the girl and Katsuro for Sesshomaru. ((Katsuro means "victorious son", enough to piss Inuyasha off. ^^ I love on the show when he gets mad.))
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Reviewed By: PawnShoppeLove [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 17:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pretty good story, but you might want to break it into paragraphs.
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Reviewed By: cute_sweetheart11 On: August 16, 2004 19:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like your fic its a neat idea. I think its funny that inuyasha changed into a human. I think its cute too. I hope you continue with your fic soon because I want to read more. By the way I think a neat name for a character is Kiral.
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