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| "Riding the Wave" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] | Reviewed By: hoppy159 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2011 15:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It took me a little while to figure it out, but I'm sure now: Saya is a reincarnation of Sai (born May 5 - the same day/year Sai disappeared, she's never lost a game). It's interesting how Saya seems to be a rascal like a younger Hikaru, but has Akira as her sensei. I guess it makes sense, given Hikaru's upcoming wedding, he'd never have been able to take her on as a student just then. To my mind, it seemed more logical if Hikaru had become her teacher. Although given how close Hikaru and Akira are, I'm sure he is contributing to her education as much as Akira. All in all, a very enjoyable story. I look forward to additional chapters . | Reviewed By: Haruna_Pan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2011 09:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an interesting type of review, my very first in fact. I've enjoyed this story and while my grades aren't really reliable so to speak because I don't fancy myself as a critique eye, I've honestly done my best to express it somehow. That last scene was just priceless somehow, thank you! | Reviewed By: Akime On: March 24, 2008 23:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like this fic a lot, and would be really happy if you updated this soon. I enjoyed reading this story and it's have interesting plot. Of courese I can't say is it common idea, because I haven't read many HnG fics. Update soon, please?
| Reviewed By: Random Chaos On: July 18, 2007 01:20 EDT
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I liked this story a lot, and have bookmarked it. The characters are in character, Saya-chan (sai?) Is perfect spunky ten-year-old, the story its self is interesting. The only thing that worries me is the long time between posting. Chap 7 in '04 and chap 8 in '07. Hopefully you will write more soon. With much anticipation, Random
| Reviewed By: eMdzey On: July 11, 2007 08:46 EDT
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This is really interesting and original :D That past scandal is especially interesting, I don't think I have ever read anything quite like that. It helps that I don't really like Waya all that much, I think. I'd like to see more of the other pros, though, if you don't mind. I miss Isumi, even though I'm not normaly a very big fan of his. And, of course, I loved the last chapter's ending :) And that says quite a lot, actually, as I'm not really a big AkiHika fan :) I don't know if I really like Saya, though. Well I do like her, but I don't like the fact that she's quite obviously a reincarnation of Sai. That makes it impossible for him to come back as himself - a hope I always hold, even if he doesn't appear in the fanfic :)
| Title: Happiness
Reviewed By: therhoda [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 09:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Happy happy dance* Okay I would go for coherent but it dosn't seem to be working. I will just say i was SO happy to see this update. I am really looking forward to what happens next.
| Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 17:16 EDT
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Your story has been selected as a MediaMiner Featured Fanfiction for the following reason: This is an interesting continuation that takes a common premise in HnG fic and turns it on its ear. The characters for once are in character and I actually like the OC a lot! She fit in quite well with the story, and it does really have the feel of the manga. The relationships are very well done despite the time gap, and it works beautifully as a continuation. Congratulations!
| Reviewed By: bubb On: January 30, 2005 09:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is definitely top notch. There are too few quality, in-character hikago fics out there today. Write more!
| Reviewed By: Duryudana On: August 21, 2004 10:02 EDT
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Finally, an update! So you're boicoting ffnet heh? Can't say that they don't deserve it, because they do! But it'll become a little harder for me to check for updates on your fics now that they're no longer updated there. I found this chap from the link in your LJ... BTW, nice chapter and I hope you'll update soon. I don't like Ochi! And thanks to this fic now I hate him (and Waya)!
| Reviewed By: summercloud On: August 18, 2004 00:00 EDT
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I liked this latest chapter! I understand why you left fanfiction.net, I guess, so thanks for updating elsewhere. Your use of Saya makes the story new and different, and the past scandel you reveal adds a good suspenseful element. Thanks.
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