| "Well That Was Surprising" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Peachie On: February 24, 2005 13:02 CST
Comment/Review:
This...is...AWESOME! O_O I love the plot...I love Uo/Kyo, Yuki/Haru and -of course- Tori/Tohru :DDDD awesome awesome wonderful uber awesome. Please please please update soon! ^^;
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Reviewed By: Frankie Crow On: August 23, 2004 09:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful fanfic... I hope you update it soon. But just to help u out with the Haru/Yuki part: You should have Yuki talk to Haru about their relationship and have Yuki explain to Haru that he really likes him but only as a friend and that he would like it if their relationship would stay the same...and maybe have Tohru walk in on the conversation and then Haru can walk out of the scene and go out to get himself lost and maybe he can walk into the flower shop and talk to Hana then the Haru/Hana can happen and they would make a pretty cute couple ^_^" But i liked the Yaoi part also. And i'm a girl lol...
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Reviewed By: Self_insertion On: August 22, 2004 01:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like the Kyou/Uo parts, but I have to admit, the other chapters are pretty dull. I'm a Kyou/Yuki shipper myself, but those cute Uo/Kyou chapters made me smile. Great Work!
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