Reviewed By: AnonymousT On: October 05, 2004 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah... a fairly original fanfic. I enjoyed this chapter thoroughly. There are some spelling and grammatical errors, but it's all good. You just need to watch out for those. What I really thought was that you could have added more to this chapter. When you explained something, it was fairly short. Great job though.
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