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| "Silver and Cold" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Yami_Bakura_Itemri [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 00:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
T___T That was hawt!!!
| Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 05:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
wooooooow, that was nice, haha, I love it when Bakura is all cynical about everything and such. I think you made that part of Bakura come out wonderfully with all the cynical remarks.
| Title: fweeeee!!!!!
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was quite enjoyable, heh heh ^^ Ahhh... I needed a good lemon.. but one thing about this story that bugs me. The asterisk.. I think the use of them was excessive, I don't wanna cramp your style or anything, but they were used too many times in a weird way, although I knew what you meant. Hmm.. maybe italics would be better? Anyway, that's just me, you don't have to even bother. Still, this was very cute and Bakura is a baka.. lol. Ryou was all forceful.. I prefer him to act more like an uke. Very nicely written ^^
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