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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 08:23 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this is a beautiful story. I've read the prequel to this and I'm really loving this. I also look forward to the sequel. The story was really well done, you gave a good salution for trunks sword given the A/U. I feel so sorry for Vejita but I do understand, he is a walking god and everyone knows it.
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: June 22, 2005 11:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool they cloned her! Well Irealy enjoyed reading this fic so please...(gets down on hands and knees) Please wright the sequill soon Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: June 15, 2005 14:32 CDT
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It was a trap? He knew they were coming...is Vegeta ok, is she ok...poor Trunks so confused, where is Goku why is he not holding onto the prince? Or is he protecting Trunks? PLEASE UP-DATE SOON!!! Hurry must know, Bye for now LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: June 09, 2005 23:13 CDT
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Hi agian, hey I read some of the reviews, each to thier own please don't stop writing this story is long but that is what make it so goo. It keeps you guessing so please don't stop writing it...yours fathfully LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: June 09, 2005 23:07 CDT
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Cool Trunks alive...I have a question, can Noran change shape or anything like that? Not that I am saying you are putting them right in the middle of a trap or anthing but just course that all...Please update soon...LadyKATT PS Thumbs up VEGAT IS GOING TO HAVER A BABY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: why do you write so bad???
Reviewed By: i hate men!!!!!!!!! On: June 09, 2005 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the worst stories i have ever read, why??? because it sucks, it´s boring and toooooo long, nothing happens durning the story, it has been 25 chapters and it´s almost the same in every chapter, i don´t like it and please make it end soon. don´t torture us like this, oh please stoooooop. i don´t deserve this torture, ahhhhhhhh stoooooop writiiiiiiiiing, i´m dying out of boredom waaaaaahhhhhh stoooooooooooooppppppp. ;P
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Reviewed By: Prinsess Katreena On: June 05, 2005 00:21 CDT
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Gee Vegeta has bad luck. I am glad he is ok...now all they have to do is fine Trunks before he gose in full heat or there might be truble to pay...please update soon Keep up good work LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: May 28, 2005 23:37 CDT
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Is Vegeta ok?! what do you mean he blacked out? Please tell me he is ok and just over loaded with pleasure...I am glad they found away to mate...please update soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: May 22, 2005 22:51 CDT
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Wow grate chapters sorry it took so long to review been sick. I hope things work out soon please tell me they will make it threw this...they will mate...or will it only be three leaving that place instead of four? please update soon. Thumbs up too you and your bets readers!!!! LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: May 07, 2005 09:52 CDT
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Damn Vegeta has bad luck...I am glad he is dead...But Noran will send someone else wont he...I hope they fined Trunks soon and alive...it would be Vegetas' luck Trunks has befriended that evil man and has been brain wash too think Vegeta and Goku are his enemys...but you are not thart crule right? Please UP date soon...LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: April 29, 2005 20:50 CDT
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What are you plotting? This guy I don't trust him and he beeter keep his wanderin g eyes off Vegetas' tail...Well done both chapters...please up date soon...he is a SPY RIGHT AM i RIGHT? PLEASE TELL... Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: April 18, 2005 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Vegeta...he is more talkitive when he has no power...cool chapter...I am glad she admitted that revenge will not bring the pleaser she wanted...will they find Trunks soon? Please update soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princes Katreena On: April 12, 2005 09:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hi it not that I don't like her I am mad at what she is doing to Goku.....will Vegeta live this time? I hope thing work out Biting nails here but there is aomething I was wondering she keeps having second thoughts it seam is she being controld by that wizard who has Trunks? Has it been a trap all along is she being used with out knowing? Please up date soon well done so far LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: March 19, 2005 18:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do not like her...nope I dod not...I am so glad they are ok hope they fined Trunks ok Vegeta will lose all his sanity I think if Trunks dies... Please up-date soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 11:01 CST
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Wow, that was the most evil chapter of anything I've ever read. I never even expected that Arhae was trying to set them up like that! And if you're wondering about my lovely compliment, I've read quite a few Veg/Goku fics, but the reason I like yours so much is becauase it keeps my interest and it is unpredictable, which I find to be a wonderful trait to have in writing. It is pretty hard to keep my interest as well. Good job update quickly cause i wanna know what happens!!!
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