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| "Forgotten and Alone" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Neato-Creative!
Reviewed By: Somegirl-Morning On: April 04, 2005 03:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic and I hope you update in the near future. As an author myself, I can understand the ups/downs and sporadic writing. Don't let negative reviews get to you, and write whatever you want. I read a lot of fanfiction from many different anime, plus non-anime, and I've never come across this plot anywhere. This is very creative and I like how you put Fake into the story. Keep going and update soon! ^_^
| Reviewed By: buenagirl13 On: August 30, 2004 20:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
I usually don't leave negative reviews, but I just didn't get this fic. I actually couldn't finish chapter 2 and the parts I did read was just me skimming through it hoping to get to the part where Aya wakes up from this freaky dream or something. This story is very unique and am sure that there is an audience for it, but I must say, I just didn't enjoy it at all.
| Title: jin-i-seid
Reviewed By: Jin-i-Seid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
o....k. this is ...highly disturbing. i don't really know what to say. i LOVED the first chapter, thinking it was most definitely a prelude to one hell of a mystery...but the whole cat thing in the second chapter...that's just freaky. NOT THAT IT'S NOT GOOD. despite the...definite UNIQUENESS of this story...and the degredation to one of anime's most commendable creation's yet--aya fujimiya....i think this story still has potential...especially if it finds the right adience that can appreciate it for its unheard of elements. Your style of writing is also unique, though it could be a bit more engaging....a bit more captivitating, if u will. As of right now it reads almost blandly with little intriguing thought process, or thought provoking characteristics. anyway...keep up the good work, and i hope u get more reviews! ^^ write what u want, and don't let ANYTHING discourage u!
| Title: jin-i-seid
Reviewed By: Jin-i-Seid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
o....k. this is ...highly disturbing. i don't really know what to say. i LOVED the first chapter, thinking it was most definitely a prelude to one hell of a mystery...but the whole cat thing in the second chapter...that's just freaky. NOT THAT IT'S NOT GOOD. despite the...definite UNIQUENESS of this story...and the degredation to one of anime's most commendable creation's yet--aya fujimiya....i think this story still has potential...especially if it finds the right adience that can appreciate it for its unheard of elements. Your style of writing is also unique, though it could be a bit more engaging....a bit more captivitating, if u will. As of right now it reads almost blandly with little intriguing thought process, or thought provoking characteristics. anyway...keep up the good work, and i hope u get more reviews! ^^ write what u want, and don't let ANYTHING discourage u!
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