| "Silent War" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 06:43 CDT
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That was soo great! You should make a sequal! that would be nice. I really liked it, no I loved it! keep it up!
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde/kitauri (not logged in) On: March 02, 2005 05:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally spendid!!! So intense that you feel their struggles as if they were your own, inwardly pleading with them to just give up and go for it. You have a masterful touch on these two characters!
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Reviewed By: SKY UNICORN On: October 30, 2004 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS GREAT! YOU ARE A TEN IN MY BOOK KEEP ON WRITING YOU GREAT!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 15:49 CDT
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Brava! Really well done. You totally captured the tension longing and in such a short story too. Brilliantly in character.
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Reviewed By: supersayangoku30 On: August 28, 2004 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what an ending i never thought they would never talk but i was rong i give this a full 10
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving your work! This was such an intense, lovely piece! You're really masterful at slamming short stories closed with a killer last line! I loved this story and it really did seem very Bulma and Vegeta. debbiechan
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Title: 0_0.....
Reviewed By: Veglma, A Insane Reader On: August 16, 2004 18:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
... that had to be a hard challenge not to have any dialog.
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