| "The Bearers of the Shards" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: j0yrid3 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 05:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn it, this story deserves a lot more than 11 reviews, what are you people blind or something? Great style of writing and everything, I wish I could write this well..."sigh" And plllz write more Inuyasha fanfiction 'cause I didn't watch any Naruto...(yet)
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Reviewed By: j0yrid3 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 08:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really great story! You got Inuyasha's personality completely right! I wish Sesshoumaru had appeared more ^_^ Btw, is there a little bit of inspiration from Lord of The Rings or is it just me? :) Anyway, i loved the story!
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Title: very niceee!!
Reviewed By: j jarviss (not logged in) On: June 26, 2006 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a very good fic!!
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Reviewed By: DizzySweetDreams On: October 20, 2005 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty damn good story, no ooc. The beginning was a little confusing with all of those ominous figures coming into the story. No other complaints here. I'd give it a 10 overall. fav part: FOR I AM THE GREAT DOG DEMON, STRENGTHENED MANIFOLD BY THE CRUNCHY BROWN STUFF ~Inuyasha I laughed for about five minutes after reading that.
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Title: Loved it!
Reviewed By: Azelle [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 03:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm reviewing in reverse order with these two stories, but that's okay. Very creative plot, and though the coffee-crazed Inuyasha scene in this story and LotW were a bit... off-putting (I know they were meant as comic-relief, but they seemed a bit over-the-top) I adored the story (and its follow-up). I hope it's not wrong that I'm including both in this review since I reviewed the other as well, but I can't help it. They were fantastic, and this story was a terrific prelude into it's sequel. Very well done. :D
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Reviewed By: black girl 06 (not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 21:22 CDT
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I did try to log in though; weird. I saw you fic in the forum and...I like it so far. The character are in character and I can actually picture this occuring. I'll review the rest of the chapters when I get a chance.
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Title: mom the manga fan on ff
Reviewed By: cheryl On: April 24, 2005 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Smokes! Talk about epic storytelling, done with wit and style! Hope you win a prize for this. Heh, you really had me going....I thought for sure you were going to have the unicorn-figure choose Inuyasha (since his mom was the princess), but I loved your ending. I hope you write many more fanfics in the months to come. I'll be checking.
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Reviewed By: kuja veiron On: November 22, 2004 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it desrves a rating even if im just speaking of something else, i think i shall read all youre fan fic. even if they'er from an anime ive never nown or seen, for they're that great/ youre writing is that great,!!!!!!!!!with all my heart you are amazing
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Reviewed By: kuja veiron On: November 22, 2004 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just like 'lord of the west' fanomanal, forgive my spelling, i love youre story it is great!!! evan greter than trance,...oh forgive that,....youlee know what i meant if you played final fantasy 9 it is great story like youre here, truely amusing youre fan fic. are please finish lord of the west, if its not already done, thankyou
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Reviewed By: Gloria Underhill On: September 02, 2004 23:32 CDT
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Great fic, I'll be looking for the next one.
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 20:03 CDT
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This was a great story...but it begs for a continuation or sequel or something... Why? Well, #1 - There's the whole prophecy aspect that involves Inu. I mean, isn't he technically the rightful ruler through his mother? Isn't that why the Wise wanted him dead? #2 - While there was some Inu-Kag cuteness, couldn't there be a bit more of it...more along the lines of acknowledging feelings...a real relationship maybe? I do hope you continue... :)
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Reviewed By: baka onna On: August 24, 2004 21:48 CDT
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Bravo! Wonderful story, well put together with a rock solid plot and wonderful writing style. I must say that's one I'm glad I took the time to read!
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